error after error
till we get it right
a new poem
coming into the light
applying the principles
we need to get started
sometimes a remedy
for the broken hearted
changing a word or two
are some of the things we do
looking for a good rhyme
within and throughout time
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Author:
onepauly (
Offline) - Published: April 8th, 2018 20:19
- Comment from author about the poem: just something to muse with
- Category: Reflection
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Comments2
I love this
its always a pleasure.
Good write but to my mind rhyming is not important, not many of my poems rhyme but the emotion shows through them.
I can see it your way,
thanks for the information.
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