Is this for you?

blessednloved

I was there in the moment where the lights flashed right before the sounds that were created when the metal crashed

 

I was there in the street before you even woke up to know that devestation was about to greet you

 

I was there when the ambulance drove through the streets toting you safely to a medicated retreat

 

I was there guiding the hands of the surgian with too little sleep knowing the prescious life he needed to keep

 

I was there when you woke to unbearable pain not knowing if you’d ever see the others again

 

I was there when the panic ensued and the fear set deep

I loved you when you blamed me and I never did leave

 

I was there through the physical healing and all of the pain

But I know that your heart was never the same

 

I can release you from your prison inside

even though you hate me if you would let me I’ll provide

 

Either way I’m here and I love you and I will never leave

if you only choose to ask

your beautiful brokenness will begin to be freed!

 

  • Author: blessednloved (Offline Offline)
  • Published: April 15th, 2018 22:39
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  • sharda92

    I loved this one!!

    • blessednloved

      Thank you I am glad that you enjoyed it!

    • ForeverJesus7

      This is a nice piece. You are referring to Jesus being by your side. Am I correct?

      • blessednloved

        Yes absolutely! Glad you enjoyed it. Just a representation for how it’s hard to see that Jesus is with us in the midst of our trials

        • blessednloved

          In all honesty I wasn’t going to say this earlier at the sake of sounding like a crazy but I thought about it and I really shouldnt be discouraged from sharing or worried how people view my beliefs as I am not trying to force them on anyone. When I write I always try to ask Holy Spirit what the Father wants me to write about unless He has already just laid something on my heart. When I write as if I am speaking for the Lord it is only a representation of what he has laid on my heart and I want to share it how he shares it with me. When I asked Holy Spirit what I should write last night he gave me these words and I think they are meant for someone specific ( not sure who ) I know that the Lord has given us all a gift of creativity so out of obedience I wanted to share this poem. I was never in a car accident to this caliber nor any of my close family or friends so I knew He was trying to reach someone’s heart and I just want to help share His love! Not sure why I felt I needed to explain myself but I hope this clarifies my writing style some! Thanks again for your kind comment!

          • ForeverJesus7

            I understand. Your piece is a good example of how powerful the Lord works.
            Persistence is Key

            • blessednloved

              Thanks! Appreciate you!

              • chroelle23

                Yes : )

                • chroelle23

                  funny, I was just sitting here about to start my first one and I thought about you, got on and read this.

                  • blessednloved

                    Aw I can’t wait to read yours!!!

                    • chroelle23

                      yeah me too once I write it all down, I only have one line, lol

                      • blessednloved

                        lol it will come!



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