You dim the sky
and drown the earth
remind me how I cry
when my chest hurts.
You dampen spirits
and quiet my voice
until you must hear it
and have no choice.
Silence me, rain.
I dare you to try.
Each force of nature in vain
until the day I die.
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Caroline Elizabeth (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
Rain and pain combined creatively. Awesome rhyming talent that ought to cheer. Soulful ink dropping like rain aesthetically poetic. Thumbs up.
Pleez do read my newest poem too and if u wish to add some points, thoughts to it u r welcome to. Or u could read my others. No pressure.
Beautiful writing... I love it.
Very good emotive write but you must always remember:
"Life isn't about waiting for the storm to pass...It's about learning to dance in the rain."
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