It's A Nice Cold, Breezy, Calm Morning
Quiet, Yet A Very Low Whisper Sound Of The Body Movement Of Others
The See Now To Exist, Contact With Energy Of The Unknown That Appear To Be
Burning Tobacco Between The Fingers, As Smoke Intake And Exhale Into The Air With A Harsh Smell That Lingers
Cellular Devices Battery Low, As Red Symbol Of Energy Battery Show
Texts Responding To Received Messages, Causing Music Playing In The Ear Phones To Pause With Notification Alert
Last Selfie, Taking A Picture Of The Current Adventure, While Currently Living
Conversations Started From Random Comments Giving In The Atmosphere Of Other Passing Individuals
Multiple Mindsets, With Multiple Round Shaped Eyes Open To The Same Environment,
All Different Views Of Sight, A Choice To Be Made Within, For The Self, No Family, No Friends, No Interruptions
Pick A Place, Purchase A Ticket, Have A Seat On This Train, Lets Ride
Sit Patiently To See What's To Come Ahead, What's Next To See, Next To Be, The Next Opportunity Of Possibility
Don't Decide To Relax Or Even Get To Comfortable On Your Way, But Do Enjoy The Ride, Because Your Not Here To Stay
Traveling, Momentarily In Time Having Many, More Experiences As You Go By In This Life, With More Lives Enter Acting
Meantime Continue To Appreciate, Continue To Use The Ability You Have To Involve Yourself In More Present Memories
Until The Train Ride Is Over, Until It's At The End Of The Line
Exit, This Your Final Destination
Thanks For Your Humanly Part Take In
Thank You
YoDaPoe, Y.D.James Poetry-The Word Has Been Spoken, Because I Have Just Spoken It.
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- Comment from author about the poem: This Creative Poem Is Basically Saying Life Is Like A Simple Train Ride That We Take.\r\nLooking At Life From A Different Point Of View But An Understanding Point Open Your Mind.
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WELCOME TO MPS FRIEND ! Thanks for your first Poem taking us on an epic 18 line Train Journey on a nice Cold Breezy Morning ! People in the Station ~ smoking ~ playing on LapTops ~ conversing ~ buying tickets etc !
They choose their destination and enjoy the ride. This is a metaphor for the Journey of Life ! Continue to use your ability then EXIT ~ This is your final Destination ! Thanks for Caring & Sharing ~ Please CHECK MY POEMS ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thankful
This poem is really amazing. I love how the words seem to somehow work together and fit perfectly to create the picture of a train ride!
Thank You, Cass.
I'm Glad You Enjoyed It, Commented Appreciated Very Much.
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