Writings From The Unknown13

Something To Catch Your Eye

are my poems that bad?

that not alot of people are even bothering to read or comment on them?

what do you people want from me?

all i want from you people are comments on what you think on my poems.

is that so hard?

what else do you want me to write about?

im hiding my identity but other than that im telling you guys everything about what happens in my life.

i want to write something to catch your eye.

do you want me to reveal who i am?

will that be something to catch your eye?

im not going to but give me some ideas on what to write please.

all im looking for is to be heard in my poems!!!!


  • Maxine Smith

    This caught my eye, great write.

  • Nuana

    Your poems are not bad. They catch my eyes and feelings. Keep writing and keep doing you don't stop because of views and other people. X

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