I fade to black as shadows
surround my knowing colours
seep to gray and blend with
bland days that linger in my
head forever unheard
I am the one that wanders from
the herd alone and lost at any
cost complete within my self brave
yet as brittle as delph that falls from
a broken shelf unnoticed unheard
I am shattered before I fall set to
pieces before I echo a response yet
I am the total of my all I resume
after the decent that broke me
I shall wander on picking up the pieces
of my broken self without help I piece
my self together all because I know of
nothing else
Comments2
Zigs,
Your writing speaks to many of us! We can find ourselves in a dark place for various reasons! It can be caused by others or can be self-inflicted! Whatever the reason, we shut ourselves down! No matter how fragile and vulnerable we are, we ask for no help! We embrace our darkness and try to be brave enough to help ourselves and not ask anyone for help no matter how long we stay in that darkness! We want to self heal and show ourselves we can do it!
CURA TE IPSUM...
~Laura~
Hi Laura many thanks for taking the time to read like and comment your comment really hits the nail of this theme on the head you really got it cheers :), you really have a talent for reading between the lines to understand a write, many thanks for your comment ,,,zigs
You’re welcome, my friend!
No matter the theme,
I like reading your work!
I don’t write much...
but I DO like to read!
Thank you for your writes!
Very good write and you will be come whole when that final piece is assembled.
hi many thanks for coming to read me I have what they call a man flu right not feeling the best, anyway thanks for stopping by I so need to comment more its a failing of mine I just so busy ,,,,zigs
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