my assistant

onepauly

now i need you more then ever

even though i may be clever

just call on me whenever

we have what we need you and i

with the spirit we'll succeed and fly

then soar with a roar 

your internal combustion engine 

is not made of clay

after all

who built the car anyway

  • Author: onepauly (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 5th, 2018 09:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: I feel kind of foolish with this one. its not one of my best. what do you think?
  • Category: Reflection
  • Views: 19
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Comments3

  • orchidee

    I'll call on ya then! lol.

    • onepauly

      on the fourth line from the bottom
      it should be
      "your internal combustion engine"
      it was a type error. sorry.

    • onepauly

      I cant believe it!
      I fixed it!
      ha! ha!

      • Laura🌻

        Onepauly,
        Never doubt yourself!😊


        A fine write! Don’t feel foolish! The sharing of one’s thoughts and feelings are never foolish! So, thank you for the share!

        ~Laur~

        • onepauly

          thank you. hoping to improve.
          I read yours to.

        • Goldfinch60

          Good fun write.



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