now i need you more then ever
even though i may be clever
just call on me whenever
we have what we need you and i
with the spirit we'll succeed and fly
then soar with a roar
your internal combustion engine
is not made of clay
after all
who built the car anyway
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Author:
onepauly (
Offline) - Published: May 5th, 2018 09:43
- Comment from author about the poem: I feel kind of foolish with this one. its not one of my best. what do you think?
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
I'll call on ya then! lol.
on the fourth line from the bottom
it should be
"your internal combustion engine"
it was a type error. sorry.
I cant believe it!
I fixed it!
ha! ha!
Onepauly,
Never doubt yourself!😊
A fine write! Don’t feel foolish! The sharing of one’s thoughts and feelings are never foolish! So, thank you for the share!
~Laur~
thank you. hoping to improve.
I read yours to.
Good fun write.
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