Franks Psychiatry 4 #58: raising the pride

Frank Prem

today they're okay
on this day at the start of october
I'm proud

 

this crew of mine
a random rag-tag of workers
has pulled together
to make it through the shift

 

it wasn't without drama
sickness left their numbers down
experience was light on the ground
and there was madness in the air

 

hallucinated voices insinuating

 

hooch smoked out of sight of everyone

 

trouble brewing behind brooding looks

 

and a young guy rocking non-stop

 

he's out the back in the high-dependency
with a head full of trouble
so f____d
that we don't know what to do
and maybe there's nothing we can do

 

I’m not sure what will become of him

 

but today the shift held up
they worked for each other
for the people they're here for
and it went okay

 

I feel proud

 

~

  • Author: Frank Prem (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 6th, 2018 02:44
  • Comment from author about the poem: Franks Psychiatry Pt 4 - acute observations.
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  • onepauly

    easy to read and understand.
    great!

    • Frank Prem

      Thanks onepauly. Glad it comes across well.

      • onepauly

        this one really did.

      • secondchancesyndrome

        liked this greatly..j

        • Frank Prem

          Thank you. Glad you enjoyed the piece. 🙂

        • Laura🌻

          Frank,
          It’s a great feeling when everyone pulls together and works for the same goal...taking care of the patients and do the best they can for them!
          A good read...not all gloom and doom! Thank you for the share!

          ~Laura~

          • Frank Prem

            Sometimes its all good news, Laura. Very rewarding then.

          • Goldfinch60

            Good write, I bet there were many days like this where all worked well together.

            • Frank Prem

              There were enough days of this sort to make the effort seem worthwhile, GF.



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