Someone to hold

Netashi

  • I’ve gotten over this last chapter

I don’t think she liked me she just liked my banter

  • And I was fine and satisfied with that

Make her laugh while we would chat

  • But now I am bored and empty

Leaving my feelings for her and wondering plenty

  • If there is another close by

If I caught her attention and she caught my eye

  • And I hope it will it will go better than the past

We will mutually like each other and have a relationship that will last

  • I don’t if I am asking for too much or being to bold

But I need to find someone to hold

  • Author: Ernie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 7th, 2018 11:49
  • Comment from author about the poem: Feedback is always welcome
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments2

  • dusk arising

    This is great. The perpetual search and hope for all of us unsuccessful at pairing-off long term.
    Good to see positive writing whilst the poetic mind is 'unattached' to a partner rather than the 'woe is me' tragic writings seen elsewhere.

    • Netashi

      Thx dusk for the generous words

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good write, that search for the right person can be hard but that person is out there and you will find her.

      • Netashi

        Thx finch



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