Love it made me bold and strong
Love it made her yield and bend
Now love is just a broken song
A tune that reached a sudden end
What long endeavour of no avail
What pious trial of years and hope
To turn up empty 'fore the veil
With loss to nurse and fear to grope
Nothing left upon the earth
And nothing left across the sea
Except this yearning in the dearth
Of mercy and of company
- Author: Jabberwocky ( Offline)
- Published: May 10th, 2018 03:47
- Comment from author about the poem: The fat lady sang
- Category: Unclassified
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Comments3
Excellent writing. Truly conveys the disappointment and emptiness which continue after the loss. I really felt this. Goes into my favourites.
Thank you. I'm glad it spoke to you.
Good flow with a real message. Great last two lines. Sums it up nicely.
Thanks for your comments. We've all been there who have been anywhere.
Very good write, so moving.
Thanks Goldfinch. Thanks for all your encouragement s. Not always great at replying but I do appreciate it 🙂
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