from the earth
flows a stream
sparkling water
so cold and clean
joining my hands
to make a cup
dipping them in
to scoop some up
a swallow or two
and im on my way
other things to do
but these thoughts will stay
from the earth
flows a stream
sparkling water
so cold and clean
joining my hands
to make a cup
dipping them in
to scoop some up
a swallow or two
and im on my way
other things to do
but these thoughts will stay
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This paints such a clear little picture OP..........
A fine write pauly.
Great piece Paul.
This reminds me of a placei used to live. Nearby there was a cave and a stream with the clearest, coldest, most gloriously pure water I've ever tasted! I would do that exact thing, dipping my hands together into it to get a drink on my walks. Thank you for this reminder of a wonderful memory! Great write!
An impressive little rhyme
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