My soul's like a ship on the ocean
Your soul like a whale on the beach
And sadly you yet have no notion
Of all that's now out of its reach.
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Jabberwocky (
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My soul's like a ship on the ocean
Your soul like a whale on the beach
And sadly you yet have no notion
Of all that's now out of its reach.
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Comments3
Wow! Reads like a strong message/warning to somebody who has either lost or is losing something very important to you both.
She has no idea what she's lost and she'll realize too late. That was my interpretation too. Short and powerful.
Such a strong write but your soul is still with you and always will be.
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