It’s like I’m Russian Roulette
But by myself
With that gun you gave me filled
Filled with a single bullet
At every click I finch
But you cried at the last bang
You’re crying like you’re getting shot
You’re crying like you cared
Saying you didn’t want it to end
How did you not want this to end ?!
When you literally sat there and gave in
You wasn’t committed
The problem was dominant
And you submitted
I’m now in a black abyss
When all I needed to be healed was a kiss
I just stood there
With a hole in my head
Blood dripping
Leaving me hopeless and scared
No better yet I’m frozen
Heart beating
And broken
You cried ?! How dare you !
You’re sad ?! How dare you !
You broke that one rule
You broke your promise
Well I shouldn’t have been a fool
And who would’ve known for you to be dishonest
Im still in this black abyss
I don’t even want that kiss
I’m still standing there
With that hole in my head
Blood dripping
Feeling hopeless and scared
Heart beating
And broken
How dare you
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Author:
Lovely_rose (Pseudonym) (
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Comments3
This is really beautiful, you can feel the pain. Great write.
JJ
Thank you so much!
WELCOME LOVELY ROSE (Great Name) Thanks for your first Poem ~ all about the pain of unrequited LOVE ! It is very graphic & dramatic ~ but true ~ because its happened to me ! It hurts but in my experience Men recover quicker than Ladies ! I am engaged now but unfortunately by Fiancee ANGELA is 11,500 miles away in New Zealand for a YEAR ~ please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you Brian! Also I agree with you on the men recovering quicker than women! I tried my best to connect to all people
Welcome to MPS! Powerful, evocative start!
Thank you very much!
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