You: H. J. Solomon
You pushed them over the edge
You put too much on them
You picked at old scabs!
You painted to many pictures
You told them your secrets
You trusted them with problems
You threatened your life with them
You treated them like shit!
You fucked up!
You forgot what it's like
You forced them into this
You followed the dark path
You need to stop!
You never thought about them
You noticed but pressed on
You navigated a way around it
You solve it
You fucking slut!
You shiver and scream
You should talk to them
You can’t talk to them
You can make things worse
You collapse from the pain
You cunt!
You hear his reasons
You hit yourself for punishment
You heal old wounds
You hellish beast how could you do this!
You look at them
You liked them
You love them
You live for them
You are ok
You ate a meal
You actually stopped
You are worthy to them
They love you
They like you
They looked at you
They lightened their load
They are sorry
They apologized
They ask about you
They allow you to talk
Both of you speak
Both of you solve it
Both of you slipped up
Both of you smile.
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Author:
H. J. Solomon (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Reflection
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WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ autobiographical and enigmatic ! You rail at yourself for being Who & What you are in the first 7 stanzas and then the mood changes and you find acceptance and harmony ! "BOTH OF YOU SMILE !" I can empathise ~ Live is often like that ! Thanks for caring & sharing . In structure very elegantly penned "free verse" Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN
Sorry, jusr saw this!! Thank you!
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