It's been too long that I've not said it all
My life is getting to confusing to talk
I've forgotten to just write what I feel
Most of all I've forgotten to read as well
For I need the raw truth baird from the soul
To connect with others in this way, helps us all grow
As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I've come from
I can see where I may be stuck again
No matter what is shared there's always gain
For this is a message to me or anyone else
Life is so much better with nothing bottle up
Remembering this message that a wise soul shared "be who you are and say what you feel, thoses that matter don't mind, thoses that mind don't matter.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I've been on a strange journey these last few months and I started to feel lost in this world I've learned to love so much, my darkest of days have been coming around again, although I have been shown a new way of healing, I had forgotten how I got here. With writing it all out and years ago when it hit again, I joined this page and forgot what it gave. To know I'm not the only one that plays this way on their stage, that so many if not all are looking to just be who we are.
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Comments4
Dan,
So much truth in what you say!
Great author comments!
Positivity is healthy!
You said it best the last stanza!
So glad to read your writings again!
So happy you are among us...on this awesome MPS site! ...minus the trolls,
of course!
~Laura~
Trolls? There can't be any here, if there is! It can only mean they wish not to be who they are and don't know how to be themselves. Luckily that what we all are, so nothing can stay a troll for long when you've have healed the triggers they can't help but belong, unlocking who they are, if not then they'll just move on forever looking for what they want. Never knowing it was under right under their nose....
I had fun with that thank you 😉
You’re welcome! 😊
This is a wonderful write and I am so glad I came upon it! Thank you so much for sharing that last line too! Very wise! I needed that and this write today.
Fantastic and there is the balance, may we keep this up until we have helped each other climb above it all. Then will smile every day, with our worries all gone 😉
Very good write, to write your feelings onto paper is so fulfilling and so helpful, then to put them on site like this is wonderful as many may feel the same and understand exactly how you/we feel.
Spot on good sir, thank you for being part of it. I hope life is as good as it can be for you and your love ones
"As I read your joys, sorrow or pain
I can see where I've come from
I can see where I may be stuck again"
marvelous.
inspiring eachother
to reflect, relate, regain
the composure that
gets whittled away by pain...
it's all love
of which, as they say,
there's just too little of;
very nice write
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