brooklyn6timesplus

Bit By Bit

Bit by bit

You can build yourself back up 

Never lose hope

Reach for the top

Continue on each day

You may struggle at times 

Go through that hazardous fire 

And keep your eyes on the prize 

Comments2

  • Goldfinch60

    The prize is there and will always be found if you go towards the light.

  • SLR

    The catch is that you can't give up. So many times in life when things get bad, or go from bad to worse, there's a strong desire/urge to give up. You've got to keep fighting or you'll never make it through to the other side of all that 'fire' ! Great write, great message.

    • brooklyn6timesplus

      Much appreciated SLR. Indeed, one must never give up.



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