Petal After Petal

Sophiiaa_m

I was walking down the hallway and he saw me. The person that I long to be with. My heart and body aches for him. But the thing I love about him is his smile. That damn smile could hypnotize you in just seconds from looking at it. I finally get home and sit in my room. Alone as always. I always keep roses in my room for one reason and one reason only. To do what I always do. My childish self starts pricking the petals off the rose saying "he loves me, he loves me not" until the final petal drops. "He loves me not" I say crying as the last petal falls off along with my will to move on. I didn't cry because of my childish game I cried because I knew it was true. He didn't love me. But the next day its starts all over again the more the days past the more I ache for him. I've even resorted to cutting one after one. Until one day I decide it stops. But does it ever stop even petal after petal?

  • Author: Sophiiaa_m (Offline Offline)
  • Published: May 23rd, 2018 01:52
  • Comment from author about the poem: Can you please give me some feedback this is my first time ever writing. Thanks
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 51
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    WELCOME SOPHIIAA ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ Beautiful a very personal "free verse poem" written in prose form ~ OK ~ You could have written it in Poetic form ~ lines and verses as an alternative !

    I was walking down the hallway
    And he saw me ........................
    The person I long to be with
    My heart and body aches for him
    But he one thing I love ........
    About him is his smile !

    That damn smile could hypnotise you
    In just seconds from looking at it
    etc etc etc

    I loved the concept of the petals etc ~ awesome ~ I've had experiences like that (unrequited love) and it hurts. Thanks for sharing ~ more poems please ! Yours BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ thanks B !



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