TRUE IMAGE OF A POETIC SOUL BLEEDING THE SOUL OUT TO SHEETS OF PAPER THE TRUE ABILITY OF A WRITER ADVERTING, ARTISTIC, KAOTIC, OBSORNE, RATIONAL AND IRRATIONAL, BASED UPON TRUE CHAPTERS IN ORDER TO SURVIVE THIS CRUEL WORLD. JUDGE EASY AMONG THOSE WHO CANNOT ACCEPT THEIR TRUE SELF. WHAT IS REAL. JUDGE UPON OBSCENITY, STEREO TYPE. HOW CAN IT BE, THE ABILITY OF HUMAN NATURE TO BE NEGATIVE. THE TRUTH WITH LIES MIXED AND MACTH FALLACIES , UNSECURITY. FAST TO GRASP EASY TO DECLARE WAR. REFLECT TO YOUR OWN IMAGE. BECOME LIBERAL AND OPEN YOUR MIND TO THE REALITY OF LIFE. IT'S YOUR OWN KNOWLEDGE , DON'T BE A NOVICE , LIFE HAS IT'S LEARNING STRIKES WHY BECOME A SHIELD OF THE PAST ALWAYS ACCEPT WHO YOU ARE NEGATIVE ATTIRE , WE LIVE AND WE LEARN BE WISE AND TEACH YOUR OWN SELF . OPTIMIZED YOUR CLOUDED MIND FREE YOUR SOUL MIND, SPIRIT, WHAT'S IN CONTROL.
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Author:
Maria Alexandra Arroliga (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Sacred to my heart.
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WELCOME MARIA ~ Thank you for your first Poem ! It is very personal & challenging ! Presented in capitals (for emphasis) free verse and continuous prose ~ excellent ! What is your message ?
True image of a Poetic Soul (I like that !)
Judge easy ~ those who cannot accept true self
Judge upon ~ Obscenity ~ Stereotype etc
Reflect to your own image
Don't be a novice ~ who becomes a shield of the past
Learn to be wise ~ teach your own self
Free your Soul ~ Mind ~ Spirit ~ Be in control !
Thanks for sharing ~ it is advice and counsel we all need everyday !
More please ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)
Thank you for your comment and the
message is basically just be your self no
matter what anyone says about you. Love
your self as a unique creation....
We all know about how people can be
so judgemental and really it creates alot of problems therefore some people become shattered and scared to speak their mind. That is why I believe in just be your self not everyone is, I bet if people would be able to change the world they would start by changing thier own character defects first.
Thank you I am honor you have enjoyed my poem.
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