Notice of absence from dave donovan
i can sometimes be very lazy, dont worry, i will eventually get back to you. i am very busy, almost all the time...
i can sometimes be very lazy, dont worry, i will eventually get back to you. i am very busy, almost all the time...
We've always been together
We always said forever.
But forever only lasts
As long as ever does
And eternity is a lie.
Empty lies and empty hearts
Cold and lifeless on the floor.
Leaving a heart alone.
Wondering what went wrong.
And eternity is a lie.
When we were together,
Forever by each others' side,
Totally devoted.
But forever only lasts
As long as ever does.
And eternity is a lie.
I am determined
To let you know,
My love will last
As long as you want it.
Maybe longer.
But don't feel defeated
If ever ends too soon.
And eternity is a lie.
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Author:
G.R. (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: i wrote this to say how i feel when a romance turns sour. its something we all say at the beginning. it'll last forever, but it can only last as long as you want.
- Category: Love
- Views: 57
- Users favorite of this poem: Laura🌻
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Comments3
WELCOME DAVE Thanks for your first POEM ~ very very true and in the last 17 years (18 ~ 35) I have Loved & Lost many times ~ but (in my opinion) "Better than to have never loved at all !" I am engaged (for the first time) but ANGELA (30) is in New Zealand for a year ~ I am praying that "Absence" really does make the heart grow fonder ! Loved every word of your poem and its structure ~ more please ! Please check my Flowers Poem ~ Yours BRIAN
Dave,
A great poem! The greatest thing about it is not only its structure but...
ITS MESSAGE!
All you say is the absolute truth!
As I like to say, “Been there...done that!”
~Laura~
Thank you, laura. I read this to my 17 year old daughter, and her first response was wow, youre good at this...high accolade indeed from the youth of today. Lol. Enjoy.
Our children are surprised when we come up with gems...from time to time! We, as parents, need to support our astute children with your awesome message!
Perhaps this quote is a forever quote...
“...forever only lasts
As long as ever does.”
I know I’ll reference it many times! Thank you!
Glad to have inspired you.
😊
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