I seen a picture today, it was of girl who had passed away.
she had only just turned sweet sixteen, leaving so young it doesn’t make sense to me.
Then when I looked into her eyes there was something so real!
Not something I could see but something I could feel.
I swear I seen a angel trying to break past skin and bone,
tring to spread its wings to make its way back home .
but the angel has to wait for skin and bone to die, to be free to spread its wings, to be free so it can fly.
so maybe this is why some people die so very young
maybe there all angels and on earth they don’t belong!
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Author:
dame84 (
Offline) - Published: May 31st, 2018 10:47
- Category: Spiritual
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WELCOME DAME ~ Thanks for sharing a very beautiful first Poem. Elegantly written well spaced and rippling with rhyme & rhythm like a good poem should ! Nice to both read and recite. I believe in ANGELS and I love the concept expressed in this Poem ~ Those who live a beautiful life and die YOUNG are actually ANGELS just lent by GOD to beautify Earth for short time. I can think of THREE "Young Ones" in my circles ~ who lived Angelic Lives ~ Died Young and left beautiful memories ! I remember not being too sad at their funerals but feeling they had been sent "for a purpose" and had lived a "full life" and been called home again. Your perfect POEM confirms my feelings ~ Thanks for caring & sharing ~ Yours BRIAN
The way MPS works is: we read each others poems and ~ if we wish too ~ we comment ! We can also build up a cohort of MPS FRIENDS ~ OK Please check my Poems ~ Yours B !
Thank you.
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