Unnatural

Poetic Dan

I'm sorry it's taken so long to write
There has been so many moments you come back in my mind

You was my first and I hope my last
As I only knew for the second that you passed
If we could do it again I know we would of chosen different paths

I saw the panic in your eyes as we both knew!
There was absolutely nothing I could do

Everytime I see it, I pay respect to the soul
For your lifes should not of ended so unnatural

If only we could of imagined a better way to travel
Then I'll never have to see you bounce off my window
Until then I'm hoping all animals stay out of road

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 4th, 2018 15:25
  • Comment from author about the poem: My thoughts after a bird hit my window whilst I was on the motorway. This was some time ago but I'm a bit sad everytime I see them at side of the road.
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  • Lorna

    Isn't it awful to hit a creature..... I hit a deer once but he deflected off the car and ran off - I'll never know if he was hurt.....

    • Poetic Dan

      It not nice to think of them suffering, I too hoped that it didn't.

    • Goldfinch60

      It is such a sad situation whenany animal is hit, even more so if they are shot. Good write.

      • Poetic Dan

        Could not agree my friend.
        Thank you



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