through tears

dusk arising

i read your word
poetic friends
through tears of shared emotion

i write my word
my poetic side
through tears i share emotion

i bare my soul
a transient fix
through tears of shed emotion

i gather strength
from writing here
through tears i shed emotion

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  • Goldfinch60

    Wonderful emotive write da. So much is said in the poetry that is written on this site that would not be shared anywhere else. That is the release that poetry gives us.

    • dusk arising

      Exactly, the word you've used hits the nail on the head, it's a release.

    • SLR

      Love this! This is exactly IT! Thank you so much for putting into words what I've felt since joining MPS.

      • dusk arising

        I know that it's usually quite an emotional event for me to commit my feeling into a piece. Thank you for reading and commenting.
        I'm pleased you were able to relate to it.

      • Heartwriter

        Yes, we all spill over with raw emotion here and isn't it lovely!

        • dusk arising

          Hey i missed replying to your comment way back in 2018 but.... i do so agree, and thank you for your words...... where are you lately.

        • Poetic Dan

          I only every wanted to show my truth, in the bigger world most people told me not to. I've never listened and never will because as you so amazingly written, this is more than real when feeling others truthfulness spilled.

          Well penned my friend

          • dusk arising

            Dan, i missed responding to your comment on this poem way back in the middle of 2018. WOW what a journey we've been on since then, ESPECIALLY you. What a remarkable change we can all see in you Dan.... and i know your new self confidence has in part been helped by all the words of your fellow soul bearing poets on here.... what a great thing this MPS is for us all.
            And thanks for your words about this poem.

            • Poetic Dan

              And we are here again, I forgot to respond to your response.
              Thank you again for seeing my growing confidence, definitely help by all excepting me for me!

            • Neville

              penned to near perfection.... and that's damned good in my book ...

              • dusk arising

                WOW high praise indeed Neville. Thank you.

              • Suresh

                I'm out of sight, and surely not on your mind
                But as you so poetically claimed, MPS is a site where I too can expose my mind

                • dusk arising

                  Yes MPS is a place for all to safely reveal what we dont show on our sleeves even if thats where our heart is.



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