What if my words did not just heal me but you too?
How would I use it? What things could I do?
Would all things I imagine, come to be true?
If I spilled hate and judgment all over the page, would the world be covered in a fear driven haze?
If I wrote in search of compassion and love, would we suddenly all feel a great weight lifting off?
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Maybe this is not question of "what if" but the knowledge of ancestors asking, when will we all believe it? This was the ending that I just couldn't get to flow ;)
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I loved the message in this write. Nicely done.
Thank you. For being part of it all!
good one;!
a single act of spite can tear a life apart, whole an act of kindness can restore faith to a broken heart.
Perfect reply, thank you
(maybe without the typo 😉
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nice write - thanks
You're welcome, appreciate the read and comment
Love the poem and Bruce Lee.........
Thank you kindly and what's not to love about Bruce 😉
I believe that last line flowed wonderfully with the rest, a brilliant write with a great message Dan!
Thank you buddy, may we continue to be our own needed change 😉
Loved the write and the message!
Thank you kindly
Good write, words, yours, mine or others can be so meaningful.
We are all a gift to this place
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