Poetic Dan

What if?

What if my words did not just heal me but you too?
How would I use it? What things could I do?
Would all things I imagine, come to be true?

If I spilled hate and judgment all over the page, would the world be covered in a fear driven haze?

If I wrote in search of compassion and love, would we suddenly all feel a great weight lifting off?

Comments7

  • Heartwriter

    I loved the message in this write. Nicely done.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you. For being part of it all!

    • Jhe

      good one;!
      a single act of spite can tear a life apart, whole an act of kindness can restore faith to a broken heart.

      • Poetic Dan

        Perfect reply, thank you

        • Jhe

          (maybe without the typo ;-)

        • 1 more comment

        • Stan Rodriguez

          nice write - thanks

          • Poetic Dan

            You're welcome, appreciate the read and comment

          • Lorna

            Love the poem and Bruce Lee.........

            • Poetic Dan

              Thank you kindly and what's not to love about Bruce ;)

            • poetboy5454

              I believe that last line flowed wonderfully with the rest, a brilliant write with a great message Dan!

              • Poetic Dan

                Thank you buddy, may we continue to be our own needed change ;)

              • Christina8

                Loved the write and the message!

                • Poetic Dan

                  Thank you kindly

                • Goldfinch60

                  Good write, words, yours, mine or others can be so meaningful.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    We are all a gift to this place



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