The Illusion

MrNobody40

If only I had the sky in my hand
Would I feel powerful
As though time had no voice
Or that our world is merely the illusion
We choose to see
We are all simply dreaming
Stuck between reality and fiction
Our life in our hands
And we blink

  • Author: MrNobody40 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: June 13th, 2018 08:16
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Users favorite of this poem: Noah Malice, SLR
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  • Noah Malice

    The opening lines remind me of the Atlas myth, and I love that precisely because I think the connection between the sky and our lives is the connection the Ancient Greeks were making as well.

    • MrNobody40

      Thank you. I was hoping someone would get that. Thanks for the comment

    • SLR

      Profound and thought provoking. Again. Great post Nic.

      • MrNobody40

        Thank you so much I appreciate it

      • Goldfinch60

        Super write, life is what we make it and what we believe and in blinking our life on Earth may disappear but I know that My Spirit will go on towards infinity.

        • MrNobody40

          I could not agree more. Thank you for the comment



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