He Was Considerate At First And Used To Make Her Feel Important. But Couple Of Months Later, He Turned Into Mr. Ignorant. She Was Sweet, Attractive, And Intelligent, But No Matter What She Did, All He Seemed To Do Is Complain. And Whenever Something Bad Happened, She Was The One That He Would Blame. He Was Like A Volcano, And He Was Ready To Explode. Her Friends And Family Kept Telling Her To Pack Her Bags And Hit The Road, But She Did Not Want To Leave Him Because She Felt Like They Were Compatible, And When It Came To Her Looks, She Felt Insecure. But The Day Came When She Just Could Not Take It Anymore. She Told Him, “I’m Leaving You Because You Are A Cheater And A Liar,” But He Said, “You Are Not Leaving Me,” Then He Threw Gasoline On Her And Lit Her On Fire. Then He Ran And Left Her For Dead,While She Was On Fire. She Was Wishing That She Had Listened To What Her Mom Had Said. What Her Boyfriend Did To Her Was Terrible, And What Happened To Her Is Unforgettable. She Has Burns All Over Her Body, But She Is Happy To Be Alive. Now What Her Boyfriend Did To Her Happened To Him—But He Did Not Survive.
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Author:
Cindy Christmas (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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WELCOME CINDY ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ very very graphic ~ I could feel the heat ! I am pleased your profile is unscarred because that is the worse possible thing that could happen to a beautiful Lady like You ! And it does happen just like you describe and a jealous man will deliberately mar a girls natural beauty ~ if they jilt him ! Sometimes I'm ashamed to be a Man ~ My MUM raised me to respect all Females and to treat you all with a velvet glove and lots of TLC ! In addition to FIRE a Man can mar a ladies Beauty with a Broken Bottle (and I've seen the results of that) or ~ increasingly in the UK ~ with a blade or acid !
Your Poem is elegantly penned with lots of Rhyme & Rhythm ! It tells a story of Love Blossoming ~ Love Declining ~ Love Destroyed ~ A perfect poem ~ more please ! I was intrigued that you ended the Poem by informing us the Horrible Man ~ who threw & ignited the petrol ~ was himself not only ignited but burned to death ! This is what we call POETIC JUSTICE ! Yours BRIAN (UK) The way MPS works is: We read each other Poems and (if we wish) we comment ~ OK You can also build up a cohort of MPS Friends ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B ! Love BARBADOS a very Welcoming & Happy Country ~ have visited on a Cruise ! Have lived in Leeds (UK) which has a large W Indian Community and a W I Carnival ~ AWESOME. Your profile is very impressive which explains the elegance of your first POEM and your ability to deal with a very difficult subject of Pain and a Destroyed Relationship ~ Excellent writing !
Thanks you so much
Nicely penned Poet
Thanks
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