I was unmasked by insecurity
when first faced with your purity
now aware that wind swept lullaby's
cradled promise untold, always
nurtured never scold.
With anxious delegation watching
you both unfold, kissing your little
fingers and toes, now standing on
your own two feet first memories of
this still so sweet, this I remember
so time will never delete.
Precious years pass as the clock
tick tock ticks, you've grown so tall
from small finding it hard to stand
aside when steps lead to strides
taking five to summarise.
My pride, my flesh such joy
no one else compares eternally
snared a love divided shared.
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A wonderful read and brilliantly expressed. Thank you for sharing
hello there thanks for the read and great comment a pleasure to share read you soon ,,,,,,,zigs
Wonderful poem.
hi there again thanks for reading my words so glad you liked it ,,,zigs
Zigs,
This poem is exquisite in its entirety! You’ve beautifully expressed the love and pride you have for your children!
As I was enjoying the read, I was envisioning my own two children! Children are a blessing!
~Laura~
P.S.~Is this the poem you said you might post about your two daughters?
hi many thanks Laura my eldest daughter is also called Laura it was me that thought of the name lol, yes children are a blessing but hard work at times lol, many thanks best regards ,,,,zigs ps yes this is the poem about them ,
I’m honored with your name choice!😊
We were destined to meet!
So I say, “Thank you MPS!”
lol that is true me must chat and get to know each other outside of here what you think ?
I think it’s a great idea!
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