Third person abounds,
pretentiousness surrounds,
His favourite subject himself,
he thinks he's top-shelf,
I must ask him why,
he doesn't write "I"
references by name,
some sort of game,
more often as "he"
never an I or a we.
- Author: Daveyboyz ( Offline)
- Published: June 25th, 2018 07:27
- Comment from author about the poem: I note on the section "about yourself" on an art site how many talk about themselves in third person.
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 16
Comments1
I have just written a biog for a retailer and they have rewritten it as you say - in the third person. Not that I care as long as they sell my work. I do like the write !!
🙂 thanks
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