Daveyboyz

Third person

Third person abounds,

pretentiousness surrounds,

His favourite subject himself,

he thinks he's top-shelf,

I must ask him why,

he doesn't write "I"

references by name,

some sort of game, 

more often as "he"

never an I or a we.

 

 

 

 

Comments1

  • Michael Edwards

    I have just written a biog for a retailer and they have rewritten it as you say - in the third person. Not that I care as long as they sell my work. I do like the write !!



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