Poetic Dan

Sea the love

I'll imagine laying here with you
Watching the sea making its move

As it drifts away I won't care
Because like our love it will always be there

Sometimes close and sometimes far
Ready to wash over each other

Comments6

  • Heartwriter

    It was a great write. Lived the wording and flow.

    • Poetic Dan

      Much appreciated.

    • Frogspoetry

      Makes me think of nelly, my daughter.beautiful.

      • Poetic Dan

        How beautiful they help us think ;)

      • orchidee

        A fine write Dan. you sunbathing while you're there?!

        • Poetic Dan

          Always find time to enjoy the sun

        • ZIGGY

          our quite moon drifts the tide from us and back again, nice to read your words ,,zigs

          • Poetic Dan

            As it is yours too my friend. Always appreciated

          • Laura

            Dan,
            The last two lines say it best for me...
            near or far doesn’t matter...
            Love has no limits!

            ~Laura~

          • Goldfinch60

            That love will always be there no matter the distance between you.



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