I'll imagine laying here with you
Watching the sea making its move
As it drifts away I won't care
Because like our love it will always be there
Sometimes close and sometimes far
Ready to wash over each other
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was half written for my lady half for my kids, really for anyone that misses someone close. Forever learning to love what I have and Need no more, thanks to all here that share the same path.
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It was a great write. Lived the wording and flow.
Much appreciated.
Makes me think of nelly, my daughter.beautiful.
How beautiful they help us think
A fine write Dan. you sunbathing while you're there?!
Always find time to enjoy the sun
our quite moon drifts the tide from us and back again, nice to read your words ,,zigs
As it is yours too my friend. Always appreciated
Dan,
The last two lines say it best for me...
near or far doesn’t matter...
Love has no limits!
~Laura~
That love will always be there no matter the distance between you.
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