Do me right

Daniela Alvarez

I am a cold person

So do me right

So the glaciers of my heart

Can become warm milk to your cookies

I am loyal

So do me right

So the day you become sick

I'll be the medicine to get you back up

I am not a fool

So do me right

Because you can't outsmart me

I am a lady in the streets and a freak in the sheets

So do me right

So I can do you right in public and in private

I am gold

So do me right because I am worth it

 

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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    HOLA DANIELA ~ Welcome to MPS ~ GRACIAS por tu prima Poema. I love the structure of your Poem and the repetition of the title DO ME RIGHT for emphasis. I love the "challenge" in the traits & situations you highlight I am confident I could DO YOU RIGHT ~ If we were in a relationship ! Stanza 1. I am a WARM person ~ OK S 2. I too am LOYAL and love to nurse and be nursed ! S 3. I have a high IQ but wouldn't try to outsmart ! S 4. I am 35 so I am sure I could complement You ! S 5. Amor es de ORO ~ OK. Thanks for sharing ~ please check my site ~ Yours BRIAN (UK)

    • Daniela Alvarez

      Thank you, Brian, I appreciate your interest in my poem, and I truly appreciate your comment but I am only 18. I will gladly go look at your site though.



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