I Want A Love

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  BRIAN & ANGELA July 10th, 2018 14:41

  THANKS JENN ~ This is a very elegant poem ~ full of rhyme and rhythm and (for emphasis) the TITLE "I WANT A LOVE" repeated 6 times in 5 short verses. The subject is a lament ~ not so much about a Person (A Lover) but about the nature (quality) of LOVE you receive. You want (and have experienced) Love that is Kind ~ Patient ~ Just for You ~ you want to be LOVED nicely ! BUT the love you receive is ~ Controlling ~ Demanding ~ Rending ~ Maddening and Degrading ! Your cri de coeur is: "What happened to the Man ~ I thought I once knew ~ I thought I loved ~ Was it a Cover ~ A Mask ~ A Ruse ??? I'm the same age as you and many of us can emphasise with the AGONY & ECSTASY of Love ! Every blessing for the Future ~ Thinking of You ~ Your MPS Friend BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poem "Rose Garden for Angela" Yours B !

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    Jenn2009July 10th, 2018 18:10

    Thanks so much Brian. I really love your comments. They always make me think. Please continue to enjoy.

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  Sofie July 10th, 2018 17:56

  This is beautiful. It has a really nice rhythm, that emphasises the emotion behind the words.
  I'm not usually a fan of repetition but it works so well in this poem.

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  Jenn2009 July 10th, 2018 18:24

  Thanks Sophie. I wrote this poem a few months ago. After I broke up with someone.
  And thought that I would share it.

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  Daniela Alvarez July 10th, 2018 18:47

  very inspiring. well done

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    Jenn2009July 10th, 2018 18:50

    Thanks 😊