The Gift Of Wings
It’s a most sad day
When hawks do not fly
Everyone says they’re great
When circling in the sky
Some days they soar
Above mother Earth
With the clouds up high
Inviting to the birds
Many days are spent
Against gravity
And it is always there
Pulling at their strings
Hawks of all sizes
Oppose the pull to Earth
And with powerful strokes
They lift high as cherub birds
I see all the airplanes
Flying too with wings
Though they don’t compare
To hawks with their screams
- Author: w c ( Offline)
- Published: July 11th, 2018 11:06
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Comments6
w c,
I wish I had the power
to take flight with a hawk!
Awesome write!
~Laura~
Thanks, Laura. Hawks are some of my favorite birds. I enjoy seeing them flying high up in the sky. I wish I were a hawk, too, sometimes!
A fine write w c.
Thanks, orchidee. i appreciate your comment.
Great tribute to these the supreme birds of our skies. Marvelous to watch when given chance.
Thanks d a. Raptors are some of my favorite birds. I really enjoy watching the red-tailed hawk. They circle way up high, and I love hearing their calls.
This is a lovely poem about this bird, very nice. I love birds too
Thanks, little dove. i'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Keep looking up!
I want to come back as a buzzard and sail through the air without a care in the world.
Thanks, Goldfinch. Oh to be a bird and fly high in the sky.
Wow my poem had similar thoughts. I liked your awesome tribute to Hawks and their less noisy flight. All stanzas were great but the second before last was ESP creatively and poetically said. Superb how u describe their defying gravity powers. Kudos. A*+.
Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart"
Thanks so much for your kind words. I really enjoyed your poem, "O Human Heart." Keep writing!
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