Words aren't enough but where do you start

Poetic Dan

There are no words you or I could use
To take away this overwhelming truth

The only thing I know is how low it can go
Life throws unbeatable uncomfortable scenarios

It takes so much strength just to face the world
Then it takes even more to say everything outloud
For this the highest bar of bravery is set
Never to be excelled by any Manliness

Females hold the answer to forgiveness and love
As a male I say this with all the air in my lungs

With every atom of your being, you show me never give up
But just like we ask from you, we need to understand and support with love

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 12th, 2018 01:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: This is written for a friend who lost her child at birth and in memory of others I've know that still smile facing us all, knowing their never get another chance. Thank you ladys for showing strength is not just a physical action.
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Comments5

  • orchidee

    A fine write Dan.

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write, One of our friends lost two babies but had to go full term.

    It is so sad to see a child's coffin.

    • Poetic Dan

      It is so sad, this was at 26 weeks.
      To see him so small a precious and have all the dreams of what could of been.
      My heart and tears go out to your friend

    • orchidee

      It's deeper than a 'fine' write really. Making something constructive out of suffering, hardship, etc. Surely one of the most painful things to endure. Plus things like losing a pet, etc.

      • Poetic Dan

        My wish if it could, I'd use my tears and words to ease any suffering.
        Thank you for deeper acknowledgement

      • Heartwriter

        Great write. Sorry for the loss your friend endured.

        • Poetic Dan

          Thank you, I know she needs it too.

        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽

          A great and thoughtful compassionate poem for support for a friend going through tough times. She must love this and be soothed and consoled by the words of strength. Thumbs .

          Soo nice to read from u again. Pleez do write your thoughts/comment under my newest poem too , titled , O human heart"

          • Poetic Dan

            Thank you, I hope this energy you talk of gets to her and I'll definitely take a look at your work.



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