H2O

livsxxxx

I breathe you in,

not because I want to.

 

Without you I’d have no choice,

but to give up.

 

Watch you sweetly smile,

as you take away my last breaths.

  • Author: livsxxxx (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 13th, 2018 03:25
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 37
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  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Thanks LIVS ~ H2O the elixir of Life and Love ! Every breath we take we not only inhale OXYGEN but H20 as well ~ it is an awesome molecule and can be GAS (steam) LIQUID (water) and SOLID (ice) ! ICE has the same structure as DIAMOND and so is a symbol of TRUE LOVE ~ STEAM is ephemeral so is symbol of TRANSIENT LOVE (it happens) BUT WATER reaches the parts other "molecules" can't reach and is a symbol of ALL CONSUMING LOVE. Thanks for sharing LIVS there is always more to your Poetry than meets the EYE ! Yours BRIAN ! Please check my Poem today "BIOCHEMISTRY OF LOVE" There is a video of JIM REEVES in Concert which is PERFECTION ~ Thanks BRIAN.

  • orchidee

    You breathing in steam there? And - what Brian said. I'm no scientist, but I'll believe him! He knows!



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