Butterflies in the air
Flying everywhere
No limits to the sky
I never want to die
Alone in the air
Flying nowhere
Many limits in the sky
All I want is to die
Hopeful in the air
Flying somewhere
Pushing limits in the sky
Because someday ill die
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Author:
Raine Blair (Pseudonym) (
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WELCOME RAINE ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ Very elegant replete with Rhyme & Rhythm and a lovely use of words & repetition ~ nice to recite ! Each STANZA draws gently to the inevitability of Death ! Stanza 1. I too envy the birds & bees & butterflies their extra degrees of and they make me value my LIFE ! S 2. However even in the Sky there are limits (I've tried hang-gliding ~ scary) and it makes us think of Death ! S 3. Carpe Diem ~ Push the limits because ~ perhaps tomorrow we'll all DIE. Thanks for a great POEM ~ More please. Please check my Poems ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Which US State are you in ?
Love this, I like the repetition and the way you've tweaked it. very lovely work! I look forward to reading more 🙂 ~ E
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