Thinking of a date I once had
That moment at the table when she said
"I hope you don't mind me saying but I find you really intense, not in a bad way but I see it in your eyes"
She was right for this passion I can not hide
Not matter what I feel, I do with all my might
If you wanted to risk it and take me home~be prepared to leave this world
I don't mean your body I mean your soul before you blinked~you'll see it all
For I'm not bragging, it's just where the energy takes me
I'll just be taking your body and mind to see what we see
Nothing else will enter our reality while you're entwined with me
If you don't feel like this with the person you sleep
Keep on moving as this is waiting for everybody
but not if you stand still thinking it's all the same gritty bits
Some of us play at our very own beats and it never repeats
There are endless amounts of stars and galaxies to see
This is how to should be when you're in good company
Friends or lovers our spirits should all feel free
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i like this its very good. you have expressed your thoughts very well.
Your right we should all feel free with friends or lovers!
Thank you kindly and your words are always appreciated
I guess theres similar intensity within a lot of us who put feelings to words quite readily. To pair with a simple soul would not be successful. A kindred spirit is desired and will continue to be desired no matter how sweet are the fruits we taste along our journey.
Here and in 'safe' company it is easy to share ones thoughts. Elsewhere i'm wary.
Fantastic reply my friend I didn't think I could appreciate my lady anymore than I do but after absorbing your words I understand why I took so many before her to find her.
I once told you have to sieve through the sand to find the gold.
You remind of this wise soul
Have a peep at my piece 'easy' today, i rekkon you would relate to it easily.
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Great write. Well done!
Thank you my lady ( taking a bow)
You deserve it.
the two and no more.
Well always keep an ear to the door
But then to of loved is better than none at all, if it left your heart feeling pure.
Thank you for that 😉
This poem is amazing! I could feel your passion with every word, and just like hodge tiger said this write gives off a wave of sincerity. Often I find that I purposely limit the ways I act to friends and family despite those individuals being the people I can be free with. I am trying to unchain myself in this aspect, but overall this encapsulated that emotion perfectly! Bravo!
My brother, my friend you never fail to not use the words I need to hear for tonight I struggled with that exact fear. There is one soul in my family I do that with and my soul can not take anymore of it, I've even just paid for healing session to rip the seed of believing that I'm not worthy.
The hardest part of my session was when I had to ask for the help, but in your words I now truly feel the power with in us all, for what you see in me is what I see in you when we are speaking from our inner world.
This chains combines us all, one can't be free without us all, it's the same bus we're travelling on.
Spoken like a true sage my friend, any obstacles you encounter can be surpassed with a will like yours.
Wow! I love this thanks Dan.
Thank you I shall try to keep it up.
Much appreciated
The meeting of souls and minds is the way to be, once they are intertwined the intensity becomes relaxed that you can then move on towards eternity.
Brilliantly said my friend
Perfectly reflects my feelings in this
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