dusk arising

scars

 

 

how gentle
she poured
her elixir of love
upon those scars
neath which
my demons slumbered

and now
a bird of hope
trills clear and fresh
as each new day
casts light of invitation
to tread a new path

Comments6

  • little dove

    Lovely
    I also love the quote that you have attached to this poem

    • dusk arising

      Thank you little dove. Yes that little verse in the picture is quite beautiful.

    • Goldfinch60

      May each new path be filled with wonder and joy (and jazz).

      • dusk arising

        Thank you sir! This is a pure fantasy write. I have yet to meet such an elixir bearing beauty. But i shall be writing about my vision of her soon.

      • orchidee

        And may that bird keep trilling. It might even speak, like parrots do?! What will it say?

        • dusk arising

          SQUAAAAAWWKKK... avast there Orchi!

        • Heartwriter

          Awww! This is so beautiful. Refreshing read!

          • dusk arising

            Yus, there must be something noble creeps into me every now and then. I don't know where its coming from. Thank you for your lovely comment.

            • Heartwriter

              Your most welcome

            • Candlewitch

              dear d.a.

              I haven't the words to tell you how profoundly this reached me! beautiful...

              *hugs, Cat

              • dusk arising

                Wow! I think a lot of us have those scars and demons. Maybe the right person does have a way to soothe and lay them to rest. I live in hope.
                It's a lovely feeling to know one's heartfelt words can reach out and touch a reader. Thank you for your lovely comment.

              • Poetic Dan

                ... Speechless! Well not really but I'd rather just stay with your words and quote.
                Thank you very much

                • dusk arising

                  Speechless??? So long as you find inspiration to continue writing your gems all will be well. Thanks for reading my stuff Dan, I appreciate comments from you.



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