scars

dusk arising

 

 

how gentle
she poured
her elixir of love
upon those scars
neath which
my demons slumbered

and now
a bird of hope
trills clear and fresh
as each new day
casts light of invitation
to tread a new path

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: July 23rd, 2018 01:38
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Rainbow

    Lovely
    I also love the quote that you have attached to this poem

    • dusk arising

      Thank you little dove. Yes that little verse in the picture is quite beautiful.

    • Goldfinch60

      May each new path be filled with wonder and joy (and jazz).

      • dusk arising

        Thank you sir! This is a pure fantasy write. I have yet to meet such an elixir bearing beauty. But i shall be writing about my vision of her soon.

      • orchidee

        And may that bird keep trilling. It might even speak, like parrots do?! What will it say?

        • dusk arising

          SQUAAAAAWWKKK... avast there Orchi!

        • Heartwriter

          Awww! This is so beautiful. Refreshing read!

          • dusk arising

            Yus, there must be something noble creeps into me every now and then. I don't know where its coming from. Thank you for your lovely comment.

            • Heartwriter

              Your most welcome

            • Poetic Dan

              ... Speechless! Well not really but I'd rather just stay with your words and quote.
              Thank you very much

              • dusk arising

                Speechless??? So long as you find inspiration to continue writing your gems all will be well. Thanks for reading my stuff Dan, I appreciate comments from you.



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