Rest that head
Relax your mind
Close those windows
Of time
Let go
Your now here
There's nothing more
To fear
We can float
Above it all
Remember
Where you come from
It was light
With pure love
And it's where
You will
Return
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I getting better on the guitar, I'm hoping with practice I'll do them together, then with courage I will share. For now this is a start
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Was this for one of your children?
If so we were simultaneously writing about our children!
I wonder if it is the time of year?
My boys never stop teaching me and I can never stop believing in them!
Yes it was for them but from my experience up to this very moment as I see others born and one's that don't make it.
I'm glad we are on the same vibration
Yes a healing piece of tender care and wise advice Dan - and a fine tribute from a Dad who knows how to comfort his children. A lovely read.
Your words are always so kind, I am so grateful everytime.
Dan, this is so tender and sweet. Loved it. Great dad you are.
Your support is always welcome. Thank you for reading
Beautiful loving write Dan.
Thank you kindly my friend
Don't invite me round to sing. it won't be healing. It'll be torture. lol. They'll think it's two cats fighting, but there ya go.
A fine write Dan, I say, a fine wri......zzzzzzzzzzz (it caused me to nod off!).
Fantastic! Glad I could bring rest rather than my normal whos who kind of tangled mess.
Thank you
This will be great for your young kids Dan. Writing for young ones is such fun isn't it.
Let us know how your piece here is received by them.
I sent to my daughter yesterday and she sang it back to me, in her own little style. Then she sent me one of her own, freestyle from my last part. I promise you it\'s still playing in my heart.
Thank you for asking
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