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Rhymester muses
AwHec8 said:
Wow! I Love it, the write, the rhythm and rhyme, the pictures to go with, the way you used editing tools to write it in almost cursive and to put a nice background hue. Don
So you copyright your poems?
July 7th, 2020 06:08
AwHec8 said:
Wow! I Love it, the write, the rhythm and rhyme, the pictures to go with, the way you used editing tools to write it in almost cursive and to put a nice background hue. Don
So you copyright your poems?
July 7th, 2020 06:08
Rhymester muses
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD MORNING BROTHER ! Thanks for you uplifting Muse ~ Poetically & Spiritually on this sunny Essex Morning ! The Scriptures exhort us to Consider & Conserve the Birds of the Air ~ Birdwatching & Pictures of Birds always stir my MUSE ! Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks.
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey Cat ~ AMEN !
July 7th, 2020 04:29
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
BRIAN HERE ~ GOOD MORNING BROTHER ! Thanks for you uplifting Muse ~ Poetically & Spiritually on this sunny Essex Morning ! The Scriptures exhort us to Consider & Conserve the Birds of the Air ~ Birdwatching & Pictures of Birds always stir my MUSE ! Please check *PLANET EARTH ~ MANS RESPONSIBILITY* Thanks.
Love - Peace - Joy to You & Yours
Brian - Angela & Smokey Cat ~ AMEN !
July 7th, 2020 04:29
The corona catastrophe
jarcher54 said:
I\'m with dusk on the praying thing but I respect you trying to make sense of it all. Whether it\'s God or Mother Nature, the pandemic does render us humble and literally to our knees. My favorite comment on praying is from the lyrics to \"Tom Ames\' Prayer\" by Robert Earl Keen:
… And you know I ain\'t never prayed before
cause it always seemed to me
that prayin\'s the same as beggin\' Lord
I don\'t take no charity
But right now I\'d take some divine charity if not for me for so many others.
It is frightening when there is \"nil a pill.\" Well said!
July 2nd, 2020 06:36
jarcher54 said:
I\'m with dusk on the praying thing but I respect you trying to make sense of it all. Whether it\'s God or Mother Nature, the pandemic does render us humble and literally to our knees. My favorite comment on praying is from the lyrics to \"Tom Ames\' Prayer\" by Robert Earl Keen:
… And you know I ain\'t never prayed before
cause it always seemed to me
that prayin\'s the same as beggin\' Lord
I don\'t take no charity
But right now I\'d take some divine charity if not for me for so many others.
It is frightening when there is \"nil a pill.\" Well said!
July 2nd, 2020 06:36
The corona catastrophe
Bragee said:
No better place to put hope and faith than in prayer.
Science and politics have failed us in an area we should have never trusted them in.
May 16th, 2020 11:21
Bragee said:
No better place to put hope and faith than in prayer.
Science and politics have failed us in an area we should have never trusted them in.
May 16th, 2020 11:21
The corona catastrophe
Poetic Dan said:
I love your spirit but mine will never sit by a window sill.... We are souls with this organism as a body, so complex we are still yet to understand it! If we was ever ment to at all! As all life on this planet is in harmony but humans, although we are the smartest most eloquent thing on this planet, if we so choose to be....
Thanks for this inspiring me to write another and post one I\'ve been a bit hesitate too.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
May 13th, 2020 01:35
Poetic Dan said:
I love your spirit but mine will never sit by a window sill.... We are souls with this organism as a body, so complex we are still yet to understand it! If we was ever ment to at all! As all life on this planet is in harmony but humans, although we are the smartest most eloquent thing on this planet, if we so choose to be....
Thanks for this inspiring me to write another and post one I\'ve been a bit hesitate too.
Keep up the write
Much peace and respect
May 13th, 2020 01:35
The corona catastrophe
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
An excellent write, so deep, poignant and it captures brilliantly the ravages of Covid 19 and its devastating effects worldwide.
God is in control and hopefully his timing will come soon when there is a cure.
Keep fit, healthy, well and safe and writing.
FineB
May 9th, 2020 08:39
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
An excellent write, so deep, poignant and it captures brilliantly the ravages of Covid 19 and its devastating effects worldwide.
God is in control and hopefully his timing will come soon when there is a cure.
Keep fit, healthy, well and safe and writing.
FineB
May 9th, 2020 08:39
The corona catastrophe
myself and me said:
Pandemic is a world tragedy. I am not sure that it will be exterminated. We might better learn to live with it. Well done.
May 8th, 2020 23:13
myself and me said:
Pandemic is a world tragedy. I am not sure that it will be exterminated. We might better learn to live with it. Well done.
May 8th, 2020 23:13
The corona catastrophe
rew4er2nail said:
honorable to be privy reading poetic resonance stoked courtesy coronavirus (COVID-19) well nigh said organism a household name, and inexplicable death sentence no matter age, gender, orientation (sexual)...
plus laudatory to commend those first responders, whose every life and limb risked in a valiant attempt to eradicate those unfortunate persons afflicted with mutating cellular nemesis.
May 8th, 2020 21:37
rew4er2nail said:
honorable to be privy reading poetic resonance stoked courtesy coronavirus (COVID-19) well nigh said organism a household name, and inexplicable death sentence no matter age, gender, orientation (sexual)...
plus laudatory to commend those first responders, whose every life and limb risked in a valiant attempt to eradicate those unfortunate persons afflicted with mutating cellular nemesis.
May 8th, 2020 21:37
The corona catastrophe
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ZYNZAB - thank you for an elegant & Hearrtfelt Poem on the very NASTY CORONA VIRUS - CORVID 19 - that is blighting the lives of the whole WORLD. I work as a PHYSIO in a big Hospital so I see the devatating effect of *DEATH BY COVID 19* every week. Not only the Patients but also the Dedicated Medical Staff. Im on ORTHOPEDIC not ICU but I do feel all their PAIN. I ama Committed Christian so I do Pray for God to empower the Medical Staff with HEALING and for the Virologists to find a VACCINE ! Prayer changes things and our Church continues the Prayer Meetings on ZOOM - AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please vist our SITE - Thanks A & B !
May 8th, 2020 09:59
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
ANGELA HERE - Good Afternoon ZYNZAB - thank you for an elegant & Hearrtfelt Poem on the very NASTY CORONA VIRUS - CORVID 19 - that is blighting the lives of the whole WORLD. I work as a PHYSIO in a big Hospital so I see the devatating effect of *DEATH BY COVID 19* every week. Not only the Patients but also the Dedicated Medical Staff. Im on ORTHOPEDIC not ICU but I do feel all their PAIN. I ama Committed Christian so I do Pray for God to empower the Medical Staff with HEALING and for the Virologists to find a VACCINE ! Prayer changes things and our Church continues the Prayer Meetings on ZOOM - AMEN
Blessings & Peace & Joy to You & Yours
Love Angela & Brian 🧡🤍💙🤍🧡
Please vist our SITE - Thanks A & B !
May 8th, 2020 09:59
The corona catastrophe
Nafis Light said:
I just think that there is going to be another poem, like a continuation to this one...because the whole thing is not finished yet (lockdown and all). The ending is so far, true though...and there are those who pray as a group to be protected from the virus.
May 8th, 2020 09:42
Nafis Light said:
I just think that there is going to be another poem, like a continuation to this one...because the whole thing is not finished yet (lockdown and all). The ending is so far, true though...and there are those who pray as a group to be protected from the virus.
May 8th, 2020 09:42
The corona catastrophe
dusk arising said:
What do you say to the relatives and loved ones of those who fervently prayed... were ignored ... and died? What incentive is that for anyone to pray?
May 8th, 2020 06:02
dusk arising said:
What do you say to the relatives and loved ones of those who fervently prayed... were ignored ... and died? What incentive is that for anyone to pray?
May 8th, 2020 06:02
The better Gems
rrodriguez said:
Awesome! Beautiful! I enjoy your descriptions so much. Great work!
April 13th, 2020 11:11
rrodriguez said:
Awesome! Beautiful! I enjoy your descriptions so much. Great work!
April 13th, 2020 11:11
The better Gems
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A beautiful poem with sparkling gems of wisdom.
Keep writing and safe & healthy during these difficult times.
FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:33
FineB said:
Hello S.zaynab,
A beautiful poem with sparkling gems of wisdom.
Keep writing and safe & healthy during these difficult times.
FineB
April 12th, 2020 11:33
The better Gems
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The series of questioning aptly and fittingly resolves in the last line of this piece: the Creator. The Creator is infinitely better than even the most beautiful gem known as Miss Universe (and don\'t we scour the world looking for her most every year?) When I look at my Lord I look at the pinnacle; the apex of ALL that IS (beautiful). Enjoyed reading and contemplating beauty SZK.
March 25th, 2020 22:24
Gary Edward Geraci said:
The series of questioning aptly and fittingly resolves in the last line of this piece: the Creator. The Creator is infinitely better than even the most beautiful gem known as Miss Universe (and don\'t we scour the world looking for her most every year?) When I look at my Lord I look at the pinnacle; the apex of ALL that IS (beautiful). Enjoyed reading and contemplating beauty SZK.
March 25th, 2020 22:24
My favourite anecdote from Urdu
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful - thank you for sharing.
February 29th, 2020 14:41
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wonderful - thank you for sharing.
February 29th, 2020 14:41
When life was really child\'s play
Jon Nakapalau said:
Took me back - inspired.
February 29th, 2020 14:39
Jon Nakapalau said:
Took me back - inspired.
February 29th, 2020 14:39
The better Gems
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wow! Love the many \'cuts\' of this poem!
February 29th, 2020 14:39
Jon Nakapalau said:
Wow! Love the many \'cuts\' of this poem!
February 29th, 2020 14:39
The better Gems
Gino said:
This is a great write my friend, brilliant work!
February 29th, 2020 11:21
Gino said:
This is a great write my friend, brilliant work!
February 29th, 2020 11:21
The better Gems
xeina said:
What a gem of a poem this is. Very heartfelt and well-written.
February 27th, 2020 03:34
xeina said:
What a gem of a poem this is. Very heartfelt and well-written.
February 27th, 2020 03:34
The better Gems
Seek said:
What a gem of a poem, S. Zaynab. Hongera! You do such a marvellous job of replacing those \"precious\" metals that many of us worship, with precious qualities most should aspire to. Thoroughly enjoyed this and thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2020 21:16
Seek said:
What a gem of a poem, S. Zaynab. Hongera! You do such a marvellous job of replacing those \"precious\" metals that many of us worship, with precious qualities most should aspire to. Thoroughly enjoyed this and thank you for sharing.
February 26th, 2020 21:16
The better Gems
Nemo said:
And through kindness hearts are owned, very well written 🌹
February 26th, 2020 15:31
Nemo said:
And through kindness hearts are owned, very well written 🌹
February 26th, 2020 15:31
The better Gems
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt, the value of human consideration over sparkling gems, and the transient nature of mankind.
However, let me say this knowing I and everyone else is guilty of this, your poem would be all the more powerful if reduced down to its basic elements. Consider this: just the first two lines of each stanza, and even those somewhat condensed, and the final stanza cut to just one line.
Although the rest are beautiful words they do not add to what you were trying to achieve.
A beautiful poem none the less but more powerful if cut to the quick. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2020 11:18
MendedFences27 said:
There\'s a lot of beauty in this poem: Comparisons that are heart-felt, the value of human consideration over sparkling gems, and the transient nature of mankind.
However, let me say this knowing I and everyone else is guilty of this, your poem would be all the more powerful if reduced down to its basic elements. Consider this: just the first two lines of each stanza, and even those somewhat condensed, and the final stanza cut to just one line.
Although the rest are beautiful words they do not add to what you were trying to achieve.
A beautiful poem none the less but more powerful if cut to the quick. - Phil A.
February 26th, 2020 11:18
The better Gems
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ BRIAN HERE ! I love every word of your exquisite Poem. I have studied Geology and I love Gemstones. We teach Gemology @ College and it is a wonderful subject. They are beautiful in their rough state and even more beautiful when they are cut & polished ~ just as people are. I have a collection of semi-precious gemstones which I use to give talks to Seniors (60+). Every Gemstone you mention has its own *Quality & Mystique*. They all have their own application in Jewelry & Religion. I like the way you mention the Spiritual Aspect of Gemstones in your elegant *ODE to GEMSTONES*. Many of them are mentioned in our Holy Book the BIBLE. Each of us are like *Gemstones* and we can be honed & polished ~ as your poem suggests ~ and fitted for Gods Service. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ We have saved it as a Fave ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💛🤍🧡💚💙💜🤎
February 26th, 2020 10:32
ANGELA & BRIAN said:
HI FRIEND ~ BRIAN HERE ! I love every word of your exquisite Poem. I have studied Geology and I love Gemstones. We teach Gemology @ College and it is a wonderful subject. They are beautiful in their rough state and even more beautiful when they are cut & polished ~ just as people are. I have a collection of semi-precious gemstones which I use to give talks to Seniors (60+). Every Gemstone you mention has its own *Quality & Mystique*. They all have their own application in Jewelry & Religion. I like the way you mention the Spiritual Aspect of Gemstones in your elegant *ODE to GEMSTONES*. Many of them are mentioned in our Holy Book the BIBLE. Each of us are like *Gemstones* and we can be honed & polished ~ as your poem suggests ~ and fitted for Gods Service. Thanks for caring & sharing ~ We have saved it as a Fave ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
Love BRIAN & ANGELA
💛🤍🧡💚💙💜🤎
February 26th, 2020 10:32
The better Gems
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and breath. This poetic jewel is very inspiring - It goes now into my favourites and thank you for sharing it.
February 26th, 2020 09:06
Fay Slimm. said:
A beautiful string of reasons for shining like gems while we have life and breath. This poetic jewel is very inspiring - It goes now into my favourites and thank you for sharing it.
February 26th, 2020 09:06
The better Gems
Saxon Crow said:
Awesome poem. I love that you focus on the true riches in life from many difgerent perspectives. Brilliant poem!
February 26th, 2020 06:53
Saxon Crow said:
Awesome poem. I love that you focus on the true riches in life from many difgerent perspectives. Brilliant poem!
February 26th, 2020 06:53
The better Gems
dusk arising said:
Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering.
Other than the last two lines i found this an excellent piece.
February 26th, 2020 06:11
dusk arising said:
Heaven has eyes now? What stuff has been taught to you i#m wondering.
Other than the last two lines i found this an excellent piece.
February 26th, 2020 06:11
When life was really child\'s play
Syd said:
Nice poem.
Takes me way back to being a kid.
- Syd
February 3rd, 2020 20:38
Syd said:
Nice poem.
Takes me way back to being a kid.
- Syd
February 3rd, 2020 20:38
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