Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽



Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Fay Slimm. said:

An inspiring read my friend,.

February 15th, 2021 17:02

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Samer Amin said:

Thank you so much for sharing this beautiful poem.

I just want to point out two miraculous Quranic verses about the navigation of bees, and how new scientific research has proven the superior ability of the bee navigation system and their amazing capabilities in searching for nectar and communicating this information to their colleagues.

[16:68] Saheeh International

And your Lord inspired to the bee, \"Take for yourself among the mountains, houses, and among the trees and [in] that which they construct.

[16:69] Saheeh International
Then eat from all the fruits and \'\'Follow The Ways Of Your Lord Laid Down\'\' [for you].\" There emerges from their bellies a drink, varying in colors, in which there is healing for people. Indeed in that is a sign for a people who give thought.


A new study by Srinivasan’s team confirms that bees do look to the sky—even if the sun is obscured by clouds—to collect directional data from polarized light. Foraging bees pass these directions on to their fellow bees through a waggle dance.

It is well known that bees steer by the sun, adjusting their compass as it moves across the sky, and then convert that information into instructions for other bees by waggling their body to signal the direction of the honey.

It is also known that bees can find the honey source even on cloudy days when the sun isn\'t visible.

Other laboratories have shown from studying their eyes that bees can see a pattern of polarized light in the sky even when the sun isn\'t shining.

February 15th, 2021 15:58

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
ron parrish aka wordman said:

the creator of life and all it`s goodness that it brings...a lovely thank you poem to god

February 15th, 2021 13:51

Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
orchidee said:

I will just say, a fine write Z, though I don\'t see Allah as God myself.
I\'m not getting caught up in the \'debate\' on here though.

February 15th, 2021 12:23

Ode to the snail
Robert Southwick Richmond said:

I like your typography - I\'m so tired of middle-axis alignment and tiny print on MyPoeticSide.

I\'m new here. I\'ve been messing with the site\'s text editor - I\'m very fussy about how my verse is displayed. Good Unicode support - I\'ve embedded pointed Hebrew and Arabic-alphabet Farsi already. I\'ll try Devanāgarī next!

December 19th, 2020 23:34

Ode to the snail
Goddess of the Mist said:

Aaawwww 😘 This is absolutely adorable and I love the pictures too!

November 11th, 2020 18:15

Ode to the snail
FineB said:

A witty and entertaining write.

Wonderful szaynab.

Maybe we all need to take a note out of the snail\'s book and stop rushing around in life especially modern life.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

November 11th, 2020 14:57

Ode to the snail
queer-with-a-pen said:

I enjoy the simplicity of this poem, as well as the rhyming. Very well done there. I used to have a pet snail named Tsubu as a young boy, and this delightful little poem made me think fondly of them, and for that I thank you.

November 11th, 2020 11:58

Ode to the snail
Poetic Dan said:

Write up my path ;) thanks for sharing and caring

Much peace and respect

November 10th, 2020 09:18

Ode to the snail
orchidee said:

You seeing more snails?! heehee.

November 9th, 2020 15:14

Ode to the snail
Fay Slimm. said:

A miracle wrapped in an awesome shell is paid special tribute in your interesting posting dear Zaynab-- we may never know the benefits of creatures like snails and why their colouring differs - thank you for sharing their prettiness with us.

November 9th, 2020 11:29

Ode to the snail
AwHec8 said:

Yep a Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri!
We all have a part to play in this here world and orchidee Thank You for putting me back on a safe Path, so to speak. 🤣 Don

November 9th, 2020 10:54

Ode to the snail
orchidee said:

Yes, I like snails too. I will save them if I see them on paths in damp weather, and move them to the grass. Well, crossing a path for a snail must be like humans trying to cross a motorway.

November 9th, 2020 10:21

Ode to the snail
orchidee said:

Good write Z.

November 9th, 2020 09:58

Water is life and seems alive
MrNobody40 said:

Very beautiful. Water is so important, so versatile. Maybe some day we will figure this out before it is too late

September 12th, 2020 14:15

Water is life and seems alive
Aleem Nasir said:

I hate water splashing around your poem🤧🤧 it makes my clothes all wet😁

September 12th, 2020 14:09

Water is life and seems alive
Neville said:

It seems you have got this most precious of commodities off to a fine art ... a very enjoyable and comprehensive post indeed ...

September 12th, 2020 04:04

Water is life and seems alive
jarcher54 said:

Very liquid as others have observed... I had to smile at the blue highlighting... nice touch. The repetition of -ing is very smart, giving a sense of speed. Swirling is much more active than swirl. At the end I felt like I had been carried along in a rushing stream!

September 12th, 2020 01:48

Water is life and seems alive
MelissaJA said:

Love the flow of this! Its very well written

September 11th, 2020 23:06

Water is life and seems alive
Dove said:

My liquid gift to you a single tear!
Excellent write! You Just about captured
Water stirring every where! Nice format
As well!!!

September 11th, 2020 21:53

Water is life and seems alive
ron parrish aka wordman said:

lovely imagery of the movement and critters living everyday lives,i liked it

September 11th, 2020 13:11

Water is life and seems alive
AwHec8 said:

Very Great Write there s.zaynab.kamoonpuri. Don

Please forgive me if this sounds too lighthearted but this Poem immediately caused me to think of a quote from the Movie Dune
\"the water of Life\"
Which really is quite deep if you think about it, just like your words of wisdom here!

September 11th, 2020 07:39

When life was really child\'s play
FineB said:

Hi szaynab,

The innocence of childhood.

I am glad I grew up when I did.

Being a child now is tough.

A wonderful unforgettable poem.

Keep writing ✍ and safe during these challenging times.
FineB

September 11th, 2020 04:47

The better Gems
L. B. Mek said:

wonderfully written, imbued with so much passion and packed with creative metaphors

September 11th, 2020 03:00

Water is life and seems alive
orchidee said:

Good write, and erm, yes, all what Brian & Angela said. It\'s true you know, though I don\'t know all the scientific explanations myself!

September 11th, 2020 01:53

Water is life and seems alive
Trenz Pruca said:

I liked the rhythm, movement, and sensibility. Keep it up.

September 11th, 2020 01:15

Water is life and seems alive
Fay Slimm. said:

You capture the movement of water so well with your tempo and style - a wonderful look at the gift water is to the wide world of culture and how we should measure its value as precious to life. Full marks for such an engaging read.

September 10th, 2020 15:58

Water is life and seems alive
ANGELA & BRIAN said:

ANGELA HERE ~ Good Evening Friend ! The FOUR main things that make the Earth *The only Living Planet in the Solar System* are Fertile Soil ~ 21% Oxygen in the Atmosphere ~ an abundance of Liquid Water & an average temperature of 16C (= 61F) These four factors support the lives of the thousands of species of Flora & Fauna living in equilibrium on Planet Earth. Our two Neighbours in Space VENUS & MARS are lifeless & barren ! Molecules of WATER (H2O) are too big to escape the Earths Gravity so the Amount of Water on Earth remains CONSTANT and cycles round the Earth in the WATER CYCLE. It is a Good Servant - as you say - and we use millions of gallons every day - In the Home - Industry - Agriculture and for Transport & Recreation. Without Water there could be NO LIFE on EARTH. But it is a BAD MASTER ! If it gets out of control it causes Flooding & Coastal Erosion Global Warming is causing the Ice Caps to melt & Sea Level to raise. We all enjoy water but need to keep an Eye on it. Thnaks for Sharing

Blessings & Joy & Peace to You & Yours
Love ANGELA & BRIAN & SMOKEY CAT ! ! !

September 10th, 2020 14:47

Rhymester muses
Goldfinch60 said:

That light will always be there for us and the love of birds will fly you towards that light.

Andy

July 8th, 2020 00:29

Rhymester muses
PoeticBiscuit said:

A lovely little poem that makes you feel as if you’re flying along with the birds. With a good little thought at the end. Very well done.

July 7th, 2020 10:43

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