Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Centipede scare
rrodriguez said:
Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
November 10th, 2022 15:02
rrodriguez said:
Excellent! I read the poem with my grandson giving a suspenseful twist.
November 10th, 2022 15:02
Autumnal ceremony
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
November 10th, 2022 14:57
rrodriguez said:
The imagery is spectacular. The use of alliteration is awesome!
November 10th, 2022 14:57
Autumnal ceremony
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
November 7th, 2022 04:32
L. B. Mek said:
beautiful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
November 7th, 2022 04:32
Centipede scare
Doggerel Dave said:
While I\'m all for live and let live, there are times when a strong insect spray just might be applicable.....
Your poem creeped me out a little...
PS I could do without your invitations - I visit other poets all the time - look at my read rate. Your poems are usually interesting enough to include on my rounds.
November 6th, 2022 17:13
Doggerel Dave said:
While I\'m all for live and let live, there are times when a strong insect spray just might be applicable.....
Your poem creeped me out a little...
PS I could do without your invitations - I visit other poets all the time - look at my read rate. Your poems are usually interesting enough to include on my rounds.
November 6th, 2022 17:13
Centipede scare
sorenbarrett said:
We. as people, seem attracted to danger and what can cause pain. Nature paints such creatures vividly with dramatic colors to warn, but we find great beauty in them. The closer we come to disaster the more entertaining. Think of bull fights if you would or parachuting or just the roller coaster. Maybe this was not intended in this most entertaining story and sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.
November 6th, 2022 14:27
sorenbarrett said:
We. as people, seem attracted to danger and what can cause pain. Nature paints such creatures vividly with dramatic colors to warn, but we find great beauty in them. The closer we come to disaster the more entertaining. Think of bull fights if you would or parachuting or just the roller coaster. Maybe this was not intended in this most entertaining story and sometimes a cigar is just a cigar.
November 6th, 2022 14:27
Centipede scare
arqios said:
The pretty ones are said to be the most dangerous ones! TFS
November 6th, 2022 10:17
arqios said:
The pretty ones are said to be the most dangerous ones! TFS
November 6th, 2022 10:17
Autumnal ceremony
thinkerbell said:
You\'ve beautifully described the intricacies of a season and its natural beauty🥰
November 6th, 2022 09:47
thinkerbell said:
You\'ve beautifully described the intricacies of a season and its natural beauty🥰
November 6th, 2022 09:47
Autumnal ceremony
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the awakening of a glorious being. I love how many twists and turns this poem took, like one moment I\'m a leaf, the next I\'m a fairy, and then a bride, like what?! Spectacular. Seriously, your imagery is of superb refinement and you describe yourself with such divine finesse, it\'s honestly admirable. I also adore your ample diction, like I had no idea what \"houris\" or \"nuptial\" was prior to reading this, but you\'ve enlightened me. Thanks for such a marvel!
September 22nd, 2022 12:48
Rocky Lagou said:
This is the awakening of a glorious being. I love how many twists and turns this poem took, like one moment I\'m a leaf, the next I\'m a fairy, and then a bride, like what?! Spectacular. Seriously, your imagery is of superb refinement and you describe yourself with such divine finesse, it\'s honestly admirable. I also adore your ample diction, like I had no idea what \"houris\" or \"nuptial\" was prior to reading this, but you\'ve enlightened me. Thanks for such a marvel!
September 22nd, 2022 12:48
Ode to the snail
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like it!
September 9th, 2022 09:20
PoetVids - I am WriteBeLight only in Video Version :) said:
Like it!
September 9th, 2022 09:20
Autumnal ceremony
jarcher54 said:
Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The pictures aren\'t even necessary... you drew it up better than any brush or camera.
September 9th, 2022 01:30
jarcher54 said:
Playful and a bit haunting... it all holds together so nicely! The pictures aren\'t even necessary... you drew it up better than any brush or camera.
September 9th, 2022 01:30
Autumnal ceremony
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I find this piece very cultured, colorful and oriental in bringing out the season to life. There\'s so much \"fabric\" in your writing here, gifted one. A beautiful piece indeed!
September 9th, 2022 01:28
Garth Rakumakoe said:
I find this piece very cultured, colorful and oriental in bringing out the season to life. There\'s so much \"fabric\" in your writing here, gifted one. A beautiful piece indeed!
September 9th, 2022 01:28
Autumnal ceremony
spilleronsheet said:
Commendable poetry to mark the fall…when the leaves painted in golden hue, such words could imprison and justify the beauty in words…well penned dear poet…
September 8th, 2022 19:53
spilleronsheet said:
Commendable poetry to mark the fall…when the leaves painted in golden hue, such words could imprison and justify the beauty in words…well penned dear poet…
September 8th, 2022 19:53
Autumnal ceremony
madalynsamantha said:
Beautiful,fall is my favorite season.❤️
September 8th, 2022 18:28
madalynsamantha said:
Beautiful,fall is my favorite season.❤️
September 8th, 2022 18:28
Autumnal ceremony
Jerry Reynolds said:
A delightful read, S.Z.K. Fall is a wonderful season of color.
September 8th, 2022 17:04
Jerry Reynolds said:
A delightful read, S.Z.K. Fall is a wonderful season of color.
September 8th, 2022 17:04
Autumnal ceremony
Bella Shepard said:
Words describing beautiful colors, hues, textures, magical creatures, painting a vibrant picture of my very favorite season. Thank you, thank you, thank you for loving it in verse!
September 8th, 2022 15:58
Bella Shepard said:
Words describing beautiful colors, hues, textures, magical creatures, painting a vibrant picture of my very favorite season. Thank you, thank you, thank you for loving it in verse!
September 8th, 2022 15:58
Autumnal ceremony
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite season so well portrayed in all of her golden finery ............................ Neville
September 8th, 2022 15:09
Neville said:
quite possibly my favourite season so well portrayed in all of her golden finery ............................ Neville
September 8th, 2022 15:09
The value of life and oxygen
AlitaOpal said:
insha\'Allah and Amen 🌹❤️ totally missed your work but glad to have the opportunity to read it now... I totally felt this like a prayer in my core.. Blessings 🙏❤️
July 20th, 2022 13:47
AlitaOpal said:
insha\'Allah and Amen 🌹❤️ totally missed your work but glad to have the opportunity to read it now... I totally felt this like a prayer in my core.. Blessings 🙏❤️
July 20th, 2022 13:47
Telly trouble and dangers
Vaughn Walker said:
Very sad how frequent the shootings and violent acts are happening lately. I do think less TV and social media is a good thing for children. It’s good for them to unplug from the virtual and explore the beautiful world around them.
However, I don’t know that TV and social media are the cause. They may influence, but they don’t cause the crimes, the violence etc. Nor would banning them (guns) make people suddenly not be able to attain them (only slightly more difficult) If people want to do something bad enough they will find a way to do it.
It’s a burden upon the ones that raise you to give you the best shot at living a fulfilling life. Everyone’s family life growing up is different. Where you were born, your social economic status (things you were born into) education, all play a part into the person you will become. Most of all your upbringing in my opinion, is learned from your parents and social interaction (your peers). Which is another huge part of how kids learn. Of course, there are outliers in any case, but take a teenager (as an example). This kid wasn’t socialized well as a child, went to school and was bullied everyday. The parents paid no attention to them and didnt care to, and there was an abusive home life. It’s no wonder these things are happening. It’s sad to see so much hate and violence, and makes me hate the human race sometimes. I agree something should be done, but I don’t know the answer. Maybe, more troubled people should learn to write poetry. It’s helped me immensely. This community on PoeticSide has some of the loveliest people I have come across online, and we need more of that.
Thank you for sharing this poem. I love the message. 🖤🖤🖤
June 25th, 2022 06:44
Vaughn Walker said:
Very sad how frequent the shootings and violent acts are happening lately. I do think less TV and social media is a good thing for children. It’s good for them to unplug from the virtual and explore the beautiful world around them.
However, I don’t know that TV and social media are the cause. They may influence, but they don’t cause the crimes, the violence etc. Nor would banning them (guns) make people suddenly not be able to attain them (only slightly more difficult) If people want to do something bad enough they will find a way to do it.
It’s a burden upon the ones that raise you to give you the best shot at living a fulfilling life. Everyone’s family life growing up is different. Where you were born, your social economic status (things you were born into) education, all play a part into the person you will become. Most of all your upbringing in my opinion, is learned from your parents and social interaction (your peers). Which is another huge part of how kids learn. Of course, there are outliers in any case, but take a teenager (as an example). This kid wasn’t socialized well as a child, went to school and was bullied everyday. The parents paid no attention to them and didnt care to, and there was an abusive home life. It’s no wonder these things are happening. It’s sad to see so much hate and violence, and makes me hate the human race sometimes. I agree something should be done, but I don’t know the answer. Maybe, more troubled people should learn to write poetry. It’s helped me immensely. This community on PoeticSide has some of the loveliest people I have come across online, and we need more of that.
Thank you for sharing this poem. I love the message. 🖤🖤🖤
June 25th, 2022 06:44
Telly trouble and dangers
Jeannie said:
Yes the Telly does contribute to the violence, but also the rap music. The lyrics are just so vulgar. Talking about killing police officers. What they want to do to women. We glorify this disgusting so called music with awards for best song of the year and look as these so called artist heroes. Scary as too our world has become.
June 24th, 2022 17:51
Jeannie said:
Yes the Telly does contribute to the violence, but also the rap music. The lyrics are just so vulgar. Talking about killing police officers. What they want to do to women. We glorify this disgusting so called music with awards for best song of the year and look as these so called artist heroes. Scary as too our world has become.
June 24th, 2022 17:51
Squash the hate- hate bug
iAli said:
Just read it. Feel the same way as you do.
Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 08:11
iAli said:
Just read it. Feel the same way as you do.
Thanks for sharing.
June 24th, 2022 08:11
Water is life and seems alive
NafisaSB said:
yes my friend, water is so precious, and yet we are so careless about its consumption.
lovely poem, keep it up
will read your other poems as and when i get time, but do continue composing..you are a natural
June 24th, 2022 01:14
NafisaSB said:
yes my friend, water is so precious, and yet we are so careless about its consumption.
lovely poem, keep it up
will read your other poems as and when i get time, but do continue composing..you are a natural
June 24th, 2022 01:14
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