Comments received on poems by 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽
Telly trouble and dangers
Saxon Crow said:
A VERY good point. Cultural society is very much broken and this is just another well written example.
June 23rd, 2022 11:53
Saxon Crow said:
A VERY good point. Cultural society is very much broken and this is just another well written example.
June 23rd, 2022 11:53
Telly trouble and dangers
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned! your sincere willingness to contribute, to help
in whatever way
is so admirable, dear poet
and yes, for sure
the imagery
we subject our children to, plays
a pivotal role in manufacturing
such heinous tragedies, in-to reality
but we all have to remember
applying a blinkered solution
to a nuanced and complex problem
will only worsen the situation..
beyond our reactionary grief and passion
to affect change and end to this plague of modernity
we must, first
understand the true roots of the problem
for example
a lot fewer children, in modernity
have a father-figure in their lives
let alone one, that imparts such wise advise..
we have to understand
children need a support system
that\'s not paid to put up with them
or else
they hide their true selves and project
the person they people want them to be
and all the time, inside
all those issues their incapable of dealing with
are festering and being warped
into impossible levels of magnitude
and the more they eternalise, devoid
of guidance
the more their reality is warped
and life is devoid of worth
because they blame themselves
and so
in this embattled condition
fantasy gets merged with reality
and impossible
becomes, those everyday things
me and you take for granted
like a \'hey, how are you\'
from someone that genuinely, knows you
like
a hug, with words alone
delivered at no price...
these are just a tip of the depthless
pool of misery
we have to understand, first
before we even begin to contemplate
a sustained solution, turning the images off
from screens and books, would just be treating the symptoms and not the actual disease itself..
(if you must, then
just send me a private message when you post a new write
and i\'ll come and read it, if i want
but
you don\'t have to comment on my writing
just to get me to read your work)
June 23rd, 2022 03:21
L. B. Mek said:
impassioned! your sincere willingness to contribute, to help
in whatever way
is so admirable, dear poet
and yes, for sure
the imagery
we subject our children to, plays
a pivotal role in manufacturing
such heinous tragedies, in-to reality
but we all have to remember
applying a blinkered solution
to a nuanced and complex problem
will only worsen the situation..
beyond our reactionary grief and passion
to affect change and end to this plague of modernity
we must, first
understand the true roots of the problem
for example
a lot fewer children, in modernity
have a father-figure in their lives
let alone one, that imparts such wise advise..
we have to understand
children need a support system
that\'s not paid to put up with them
or else
they hide their true selves and project
the person they people want them to be
and all the time, inside
all those issues their incapable of dealing with
are festering and being warped
into impossible levels of magnitude
and the more they eternalise, devoid
of guidance
the more their reality is warped
and life is devoid of worth
because they blame themselves
and so
in this embattled condition
fantasy gets merged with reality
and impossible
becomes, those everyday things
me and you take for granted
like a \'hey, how are you\'
from someone that genuinely, knows you
like
a hug, with words alone
delivered at no price...
these are just a tip of the depthless
pool of misery
we have to understand, first
before we even begin to contemplate
a sustained solution, turning the images off
from screens and books, would just be treating the symptoms and not the actual disease itself..
(if you must, then
just send me a private message when you post a new write
and i\'ll come and read it, if i want
but
you don\'t have to comment on my writing
just to get me to read your work)
June 23rd, 2022 03:21
Telly trouble and dangers
tallisman said:
All the comments above I agree with. I don’t understand gun laws in the us! Crazy…
June 22nd, 2022 15:35
tallisman said:
All the comments above I agree with. I don’t understand gun laws in the us! Crazy…
June 22nd, 2022 15:35
Telly trouble and dangers
Raven333 said:
Wow, explosive read, I loved it. I felt the anger, the passion and the message was clear. great write!!!
June 22nd, 2022 14:50
Raven333 said:
Wow, explosive read, I loved it. I felt the anger, the passion and the message was clear. great write!!!
June 22nd, 2022 14:50
Telly trouble and dangers
sadkw33n said:
Your poem is indeed telling a sad truth, which you put into words very well. It\'s not news that violence appears everywhere on tv movies or series, video games ect. We should be careful what we \"feed\" the minds of the young. The consequences can be enormous. A great poem and a very interesting and important topic.
Congrats 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:20
sadkw33n said:
Your poem is indeed telling a sad truth, which you put into words very well. It\'s not news that violence appears everywhere on tv movies or series, video games ect. We should be careful what we \"feed\" the minds of the young. The consequences can be enormous. A great poem and a very interesting and important topic.
Congrats 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:20
Telly trouble and dangers
JudyStella said:
When kids watch their movie heroes
shoot down people with the gun
they are incited to do the same
to achieve some thrill and fun.
I love this stanza! The poem spits facts! From the beginning to the end you vividly describe the situation, the causes and how to avoid such detrimental effects. Very informative and is timely! Great poem! One to share with the youth of today and tomorrow! 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:06
JudyStella said:
When kids watch their movie heroes
shoot down people with the gun
they are incited to do the same
to achieve some thrill and fun.
I love this stanza! The poem spits facts! From the beginning to the end you vividly describe the situation, the causes and how to avoid such detrimental effects. Very informative and is timely! Great poem! One to share with the youth of today and tomorrow! 👏
June 22nd, 2022 14:06
Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
AwHec8 said:
I absolutely Love this, Poem.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 you have made me very hungry indeed. For more of your Poetry and maybe a snack to go with! LOL 🤣
By the way did you know that the 1st meal Jesus had after resurrecting from the dead was Honey & Fish with a little Wine to wash it all down. Because Honeycomb is a very most complete food. Don
May 22nd, 2022 07:41
AwHec8 said:
I absolutely Love this, Poem.
🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷🐦😽 you have made me very hungry indeed. For more of your Poetry and maybe a snack to go with! LOL 🤣
By the way did you know that the 1st meal Jesus had after resurrecting from the dead was Honey & Fish with a little Wine to wash it all down. Because Honeycomb is a very most complete food. Don
May 22nd, 2022 07:41
The better Gems
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this poem 🙂nice words !
March 8th, 2022 02:29
Violet bluebell( used to be yellow rose) said:
I like this poem 🙂nice words !
March 8th, 2022 02:29
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Neville said:
I leave this page with my head filled with colours & the gentle & relaxing therapeutic hum of a hundred different brightly hued flying creatures .. very much enjoyed ................................... N
February 18th, 2022 14:36
Neville said:
I leave this page with my head filled with colours & the gentle & relaxing therapeutic hum of a hundred different brightly hued flying creatures .. very much enjoyed ................................... N
February 18th, 2022 14:36
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A very vividly descriptive piece. It paint quite a clear picture. Well written.
February 15th, 2022 07:09
Garth Rakumakoe said:
A very vividly descriptive piece. It paint quite a clear picture. Well written.
February 15th, 2022 07:09
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words, living with nature is sublime.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:47
Goldfinch60 said:
Beautiful words, living with nature is sublime.
Andy
February 15th, 2022 01:47
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful imagery embraces the lovely nature….so vivid…well penned dear poet…
February 14th, 2022 12:59
spilleronsheet said:
Beautiful imagery embraces the lovely nature….so vivid…well penned dear poet…
February 14th, 2022 12:59
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful, well written, I can imagine relaxing with my husband Dion,in this place you so well describe.
February 14th, 2022 11:34
Crowns4Christ said:
Very beautiful, well written, I can imagine relaxing with my husband Dion,in this place you so well describe.
February 14th, 2022 11:34
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Samer Amin said:
There is a great sense of quietude interwoven into your eloquent poem that has flowed very smoothly emphasising and converting the deep inherent serenity that lies deep into the heart of nature when we can find great solace once we can understand God\'s glorious voice amid His very expressive creation and attain the ultimate peace for our souls. Thank you really for sharing this magnificent and very deep poem.
February 14th, 2022 10:35
Samer Amin said:
There is a great sense of quietude interwoven into your eloquent poem that has flowed very smoothly emphasising and converting the deep inherent serenity that lies deep into the heart of nature when we can find great solace once we can understand God\'s glorious voice amid His very expressive creation and attain the ultimate peace for our souls. Thank you really for sharing this magnificent and very deep poem.
February 14th, 2022 10:35
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem! The descriptions are so vivid and real. I feel as though I am in this paradise, bathing with the sounds of Mother Nature. Beautifully written. 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 09:28
Rocky Lagou said:
Lovely poem! The descriptions are so vivid and real. I feel as though I am in this paradise, bathing with the sounds of Mother Nature. Beautifully written. 💖👍
February 14th, 2022 09:28
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.Z. A fine read.
February 14th, 2022 08:50
Jerry Reynolds said:
Good write, S.Z. A fine read.
February 14th, 2022 08:50
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 14th, 2022 06:34
L. B. Mek said:
wonderful imagery!
thanks for sharing dear poet
February 14th, 2022 06:34
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
kitty the naughty poet said:
Great poem
February 14th, 2022 06:27
kitty the naughty poet said:
Great poem
February 14th, 2022 06:27
Ode to the snail
Vamsi Sudha said:
what a beautiful Tale of a Snail....
Loved these lines..
Which of you is the girl,
which of you is the male?
How do I guess your emotions?
You never smile or wail
To thy Creator I whisper,
🐌🐌🐌🐌
to His creativity all hail.
Nice one Poet !!
February 14th, 2022 06:02
Vamsi Sudha said:
what a beautiful Tale of a Snail....
Loved these lines..
Which of you is the girl,
which of you is the male?
How do I guess your emotions?
You never smile or wail
To thy Creator I whisper,
🐌🐌🐌🐌
to His creativity all hail.
Nice one Poet !!
February 14th, 2022 06:02
How to de-stress in modern lifestyle
Rozina said:
Very pretty description of nature. Really enjoyed this poem.
February 14th, 2022 05:57
Rozina said:
Very pretty description of nature. Really enjoyed this poem.
February 14th, 2022 05:57
Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
Floreann said:
A beautiful poem thanking God so well written..
October 14th, 2021 11:50
Floreann said:
A beautiful poem thanking God so well written..
October 14th, 2021 11:50
Gratitude to God for gratis blessings
DrSafaAamir786 said:
Praise be to Allah
Such satisfying poem with blend of blessing Allah has granted us!
October 14th, 2021 09:08
DrSafaAamir786 said:
Praise be to Allah
Such satisfying poem with blend of blessing Allah has granted us!
October 14th, 2021 09:08
The value of life and oxygen
L. B. Mek said:
well written, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 02:39
L. B. Mek said:
well written, thanks for sharing
October 14th, 2021 02:39
The value of life and oxygen
annonymouswonder said:
Awesome poem, I love the depth and meaning of it! El Shaddai loves us all so dearly that He blesses us everyday and wants to spend eternity with us and that’s simply spectacular!!
October 13th, 2021 16:12
annonymouswonder said:
Awesome poem, I love the depth and meaning of it! El Shaddai loves us all so dearly that He blesses us everyday and wants to spend eternity with us and that’s simply spectacular!!
October 13th, 2021 16:12
Water is life and seems alive
Fay Slimm. said:
I am so glad to have caught this tribute to water and after a second-time read find it even more engaging as your descriptions of its every-day value to life unfold in line after line. A fine piece of writing my friend.
October 13th, 2021 15:31
Fay Slimm. said:
I am so glad to have caught this tribute to water and after a second-time read find it even more engaging as your descriptions of its every-day value to life unfold in line after line. A fine piece of writing my friend.
October 13th, 2021 15:31
The value of life and oxygen
iAli said:
Wow! Liked it so much.
You have written it full of scientific views in the spiritual way with a lot of emotions. 😄
October 13th, 2021 10:14
iAli said:
Wow! Liked it so much.
You have written it full of scientific views in the spiritual way with a lot of emotions. 😄
October 13th, 2021 10:14
The value of life and oxygen
Lauretta13 said:
I like the meaning of this poem
I love the last stanza most especially
October 13th, 2021 02:38
Lauretta13 said:
I like the meaning of this poem
I love the last stanza most especially
October 13th, 2021 02:38
The value of life and oxygen
Lauretta13 said:
I like the meaning of this poem
I love the last stanza most especially
October 13th, 2021 02:38
Lauretta13 said:
I like the meaning of this poem
I love the last stanza most especially
October 13th, 2021 02:38
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