Comments received on poems by Lost & Found
Limitless
orchidee said:
A fine write L. Yes, some places are all \'targets to meet\'. People become things or objects, and the work is not enjoyed.
September 19th, 2017 12:26
orchidee said:
A fine write L. Yes, some places are all \'targets to meet\'. People become things or objects, and the work is not enjoyed.
September 19th, 2017 12:26
You
The Invisible said:
Wow this is really amazing! Such a strong meaning, I guess I never realized how much time and effort we put into someone we try to love and sometimes it ends up hurting us. You did a great job at this, hope to read more of your work. :)
June 12th, 2017 19:14
The Invisible said:
Wow this is really amazing! Such a strong meaning, I guess I never realized how much time and effort we put into someone we try to love and sometimes it ends up hurting us. You did a great job at this, hope to read more of your work. :)
June 12th, 2017 19:14
Connect > Power > Drive = Controlled
Gary Edward Geraci said:
So we are only led to think we are in control. In reality it\'s the soulless technology of the day, undoubtedly after our wallets, that vie for our unconditional affirmation to carefully programmed schemes.
May 17th, 2017 22:09
Gary Edward Geraci said:
So we are only led to think we are in control. In reality it\'s the soulless technology of the day, undoubtedly after our wallets, that vie for our unconditional affirmation to carefully programmed schemes.
May 17th, 2017 22:09
Screw Loose
Mizzy said:
interesting, the last four lines threw me off a little as they didn\'t conform to the rest but maybe you did that so they would stand out more and jolt the reader into paying more attention rather than going with the flow. Love the last line the most. Enjoyed your poem.
May 7th, 2017 16:58
Mizzy said:
interesting, the last four lines threw me off a little as they didn\'t conform to the rest but maybe you did that so they would stand out more and jolt the reader into paying more attention rather than going with the flow. Love the last line the most. Enjoyed your poem.
May 7th, 2017 16:58
Doors
Goldfinch60 said:
Those doors in your life can be frightening but once you have opened them and gone through them you realise there was nothing to be scared about and your lifes experience has been enhanced.
Good write.
May 4th, 2017 01:00
Goldfinch60 said:
Those doors in your life can be frightening but once you have opened them and gone through them you realise there was nothing to be scared about and your lifes experience has been enhanced.
Good write.
May 4th, 2017 01:00
