Comments received on poems by shanx1
Hurt inside
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHANXI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very revealing. You said that writing poetry about bad things that happened is therapeutic and I agree. When I was a Teen ~ I wrote about negative experiences to get hem out of my system ~ and to some extent it worked ! Now I write about Rabbits & Trees ! (Please check my poems !). HURT INSIDE is about betrayal of trust and it is very sad ! Being betrayed by the one who should most love and protect you ~ such betrayal does indeed shatter trust & confidence ! Thinking of you ~ Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 21st, 2017 17:28
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHANXI ~ Thanks for your first poem ~ very revealing. You said that writing poetry about bad things that happened is therapeutic and I agree. When I was a Teen ~ I wrote about negative experiences to get hem out of my system ~ and to some extent it worked ! Now I write about Rabbits & Trees ! (Please check my poems !). HURT INSIDE is about betrayal of trust and it is very sad ! Being betrayed by the one who should most love and protect you ~ such betrayal does indeed shatter trust & confidence ! Thinking of you ~ Thanks for caring ~ BRIAN (UK)
April 21st, 2017 17:28