Comments received on poems by shush..itstati
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Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i have gone through the same thing but once my ex graduates 12th grade i told myself thats when it will get alot easier because if i dont his face he wont be a thought in my mind
May 1st, 2017 09:01
Writings From The Unknown13 said:
i have gone through the same thing but once my ex graduates 12th grade i told myself thats when it will get alot easier because if i dont his face he wont be a thought in my mind
May 1st, 2017 09:01
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BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHUSH ~ THANK YOU FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! It is well written in a dynamic style but with a very poignant message. Unfortunately many Men expect too much too soon ~ which (as in your case) damages a promising relationship. I\'m in my 30\'s and gradually learning how to treat a Lady and be aware of her feelings as well as my own ! Line 8. \"I told you I wasn\'t ready\" I am very patient and would have cherished you ~ and not turned nasty. Life is difficult when you are at School together (or in work) and this has happened to me ~ it\'s hard ! All Men are not like that (fickle and childish) ~ so don\'t .loose faith and crack up ~ please ! Thinking of you and praying your heart and mind will mend and you will meet omeone worthy of your love ! Yiours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2017 07:43
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME SHUSH ~ THANK YOU FOR YOUR FIRST POEM ! It is well written in a dynamic style but with a very poignant message. Unfortunately many Men expect too much too soon ~ which (as in your case) damages a promising relationship. I\'m in my 30\'s and gradually learning how to treat a Lady and be aware of her feelings as well as my own ! Line 8. \"I told you I wasn\'t ready\" I am very patient and would have cherished you ~ and not turned nasty. Life is difficult when you are at School together (or in work) and this has happened to me ~ it\'s hard ! All Men are not like that (fickle and childish) ~ so don\'t .loose faith and crack up ~ please ! Thinking of you and praying your heart and mind will mend and you will meet omeone worthy of your love ! Yiours BRIAN (UK) Please check my poems ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2017 07:43
