Comments received on poems by chellewest
Making a Deal
Jabberwocky said:
That was pretty good. It made me think of someone I know.
With more sympathy than I often manage.
May 11th, 2017 04:43
Jabberwocky said:
That was pretty good. It made me think of someone I know.
With more sympathy than I often manage.
May 11th, 2017 04:43
The Storm
swingline said:
To put it tersely . . . life sux for the bottom 98% . And being in the top 2% is no guarantee of happiness . I\'m happiest when the furtherest from people I get .
May 11th, 2017 01:00
swingline said:
To put it tersely . . . life sux for the bottom 98% . And being in the top 2% is no guarantee of happiness . I\'m happiest when the furtherest from people I get .
May 11th, 2017 01:00
Making a Deal
swingline said:
I guess people have been doing that for eons . Trying to fill the void inside . But like most fixes the fix is only momentary and soon the void aches again and another fix is needed . What is really needed is a permanent remake with soul lasting relief .
May 11th, 2017 00:50
swingline said:
I guess people have been doing that for eons . Trying to fill the void inside . But like most fixes the fix is only momentary and soon the void aches again and another fix is needed . What is really needed is a permanent remake with soul lasting relief .
May 11th, 2017 00:50
The Storm
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CHELLE ~ tHANKS FOR A VERY POIGNANT FIRST POEM ~ straight from your heart. Atlanta GA is a very beautiful City (but i love Savannah as well) and a great place to stir your muse ! YES in the turbulent 21st C we all experience chaos ~ pain ~ tears ~ BUT (in my experience) PEACE does come with each new dawning ~ but alas it often gets shattered during the day ! You will enjoy MPS and already you got two nice comments ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2017 02:51
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME CHELLE ~ tHANKS FOR A VERY POIGNANT FIRST POEM ~ straight from your heart. Atlanta GA is a very beautiful City (but i love Savannah as well) and a great place to stir your muse ! YES in the turbulent 21st C we all experience chaos ~ pain ~ tears ~ BUT (in my experience) PEACE does come with each new dawning ~ but alas it often gets shattered during the day ! You will enjoy MPS and already you got two nice comments ! Thanks for sharing and caring ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 1st, 2017 02:51
