Comments received on poems by jlortiz84

Mizzy said:

Nice poem, If only it did refill

May 9th, 2017 21:52

WriteBeLight said:

We all deal with relationships and they can be a joy or full of frustration. Great way of expressing this.

May 5th, 2017 05:40


WELCOME \"J\" Thanks for your first poem ~ plus your explanatory comment ! I love the sentiments expressed in this challenging Poem ! Each of us have People who have crossed our path ~ sometimes transitory ~ sometimes for duration. I remember an older Lady who taught me about love and how to treat (and in a measure) to understand Girls ~ I remember a Professor (who I am still in touch with) who taught me that the Periodic Table unlocks ALL the Mysteries of Chemistry and that DNA was just a simple organic polymer like nylon or rubber ~ I remember an Evangelist who taught that GOD was accessible and Prayer a reality and that the BIBLE really was the Word of God ! I could go on but your poem stirred many memories of the last 20 years ! Thanks for caring and sharing ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

May 4th, 2017 10:48