Comments received on poems by Dawn Von Rue



Lunatics Mind
Augustus said:

What a delightful poem about depression, feeling distant, ambivalent, and suicidal. \"Delightful\" is not about the seriousness of the poem but the format, and brevity.

May 30th, 2017 10:29

Lunatics Mind
Louis Gibbs said:

Your life is a gift you have given yourself. To squander it would be the tragedy.

May 30th, 2017 08:58

Lunatics Mind
Goldfinch60 said:

You are loved in this world and are too young to leave it.

May 30th, 2017 01:53

Wanderlust
caroline-o said:

So wonderfully written

May 8th, 2017 07:15

Wanderlust
Tony36 said:

Great write and welcome to MPS

May 8th, 2017 07:05

Wanderlust
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME DAWN ~ THANK YOU FOR A VERY BEAUTIFUL AND INVITING FIRST POEM ! You will find MPS is a lovely site for sensitive Poets and we always accept an invitation from a LADY ! If you check my poems ~ you will explore my mind ! Yours BRIAN (UK)

May 8th, 2017 04:52

Wanderlust
Goldfinch60 said:

Indeed let the voyage begin and never end. Good write, welcome to MPS.

May 8th, 2017 02:49