Comments received on poems by Queen_Of_Darkness
Tell Me
swingline said:
Once the trust has become rust , it\'s time to move on and find someone who is not a bust .
May 30th, 2017 22:02
swingline said:
Once the trust has become rust , it\'s time to move on and find someone who is not a bust .
May 30th, 2017 22:02
Tell Me
J.D. Treick said:
Dark and brutal. Full of emotions, albeit quite dark. The honesty is real here. Sadly, loyalty is a hard one to come by. We can only do what we can in a world where trust is a risk in of itself.
May 30th, 2017 21:26
J.D. Treick said:
Dark and brutal. Full of emotions, albeit quite dark. The honesty is real here. Sadly, loyalty is a hard one to come by. We can only do what we can in a world where trust is a risk in of itself.
May 30th, 2017 21:26
For The First Time
whisperingquill said:
Pulse pounding write nice capturing wave
May 28th, 2017 23:47
whisperingquill said:
Pulse pounding write nice capturing wave
May 28th, 2017 23:47
Lost me
swingline said:
Once broken and put back together again it\'s never the same .
May 27th, 2017 19:06
swingline said:
Once broken and put back together again it\'s never the same .
May 27th, 2017 19:06
I\'m so high
Augustus said:
So sorry this happened. Changes your life. Very descriptive , can sense a person drugged and fuzzy headed.nice write.
May 25th, 2017 11:54
Augustus said:
So sorry this happened. Changes your life. Very descriptive , can sense a person drugged and fuzzy headed.nice write.
May 25th, 2017 11:54
I\'m so high
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks QUEEN for a very frank and consuming poem. One of our Lady Judges blamed the Lady ~ for RAPE ~ if she was Drunk or on Drugs ~ I always blame the MEN ~ especially those that take advantage of Girls when they are vulnerable. I have never raped a Lady and i never will ~ you are all much to precious ! For me NO means NO and not \"Take me anyway !\". Thanks for sharing ~ BLESSINGS ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 25th, 2017 07:55
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
Thanks QUEEN for a very frank and consuming poem. One of our Lady Judges blamed the Lady ~ for RAPE ~ if she was Drunk or on Drugs ~ I always blame the MEN ~ especially those that take advantage of Girls when they are vulnerable. I have never raped a Lady and i never will ~ you are all much to precious ! For me NO means NO and not \"Take me anyway !\". Thanks for sharing ~ BLESSINGS ~ BRIAN ~ Please check my Poems ~ Thanks B.
May 25th, 2017 07:55
Real
swingline said:
How can anything made of man be real . Stonehenge , the pyramids , Brooklyn Bridge . All have a beginning and an end and haven\'t a prayer of reaching eternity .And love from mortal man , is it good for more than a day .
May 23rd, 2017 00:56
swingline said:
How can anything made of man be real . Stonehenge , the pyramids , Brooklyn Bridge . All have a beginning and an end and haven\'t a prayer of reaching eternity .And love from mortal man , is it good for more than a day .
May 23rd, 2017 00:56
Real
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nice job...I think we have all been there at one point or another...I enjoyed this
May 22nd, 2017 18:36
LIGHT WARRIOR said:
Nice job...I think we have all been there at one point or another...I enjoyed this
May 22nd, 2017 18:36
Like a cigarette
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME QUEEN ~ Thanks for your first poem ! As we move through and out of our Teens ~ most of us (YIN & YANG) experience \"unrequited love\" and it does hurt and it does burn ! We can empathise and in my experience ~ the only thing that compensates ~ is to find a New Love and move on ~ BUT the memories of what might have been still hurts ! Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
May 18th, 2017 04:19
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME QUEEN ~ Thanks for your first poem ! As we move through and out of our Teens ~ most of us (YIN & YANG) experience \"unrequited love\" and it does hurt and it does burn ! We can empathise and in my experience ~ the only thing that compensates ~ is to find a New Love and move on ~ BUT the memories of what might have been still hurts ! Thinking of you ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Please check my POEMS ~ Thanks B.
May 18th, 2017 04:19
Like a cigarette
swingline said:
The eyes get lock jaw , can\'t but help to gaze . As slow burning fire inside has turned into a blaze . Oh what you plan to do , lip to lip , face to face .
May 18th, 2017 04:08
swingline said:
The eyes get lock jaw , can\'t but help to gaze . As slow burning fire inside has turned into a blaze . Oh what you plan to do , lip to lip , face to face .
May 18th, 2017 04:08
