Comments received on poems by Tiffany_Arnold
Karma
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TIFFANY (Nice name & photo !) Thanks for your first. It is presented in Modern Free Verse with plenty of flow and an interesting content\' I like the fact that you have divided it int five neat STANZAS which makes it easier and more interesting to read. The content is gripping and an honest account of your life ~ so far ! STANZA !> Mot of us have been there but i have only contemplated suicide ONCE ! S2. Is encouraging except for the repulsion ~ whic annoys you and rightly so ! S3. We all experience inner struggles and have to come to terms with our inner KARMA ! S4. Quite an horrendous list ! My list is different (because I am Male)..My MOM taught me to always be very gentle with LADIES but soem FEMALES can be quite aggressive to MEN. I like your stark frankness ~ good writing ! S5. We can all be transformed by God\'s Holy Spirit ~ who can give us Love ~ Peace ~ Joy etc. I have GOD in my life and my KARMA is now much CALMER ! GOD has given you a Son which is a great blessing and provide you with an infinite focus for GOOD ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK) .
May 31st, 2017 05:42
BRIAN & ANGELA said:
WELCOME TIFFANY (Nice name & photo !) Thanks for your first. It is presented in Modern Free Verse with plenty of flow and an interesting content\' I like the fact that you have divided it int five neat STANZAS which makes it easier and more interesting to read. The content is gripping and an honest account of your life ~ so far ! STANZA !> Mot of us have been there but i have only contemplated suicide ONCE ! S2. Is encouraging except for the repulsion ~ whic annoys you and rightly so ! S3. We all experience inner struggles and have to come to terms with our inner KARMA ! S4. Quite an horrendous list ! My list is different (because I am Male)..My MOM taught me to always be very gentle with LADIES but soem FEMALES can be quite aggressive to MEN. I like your stark frankness ~ good writing ! S5. We can all be transformed by God\'s Holy Spirit ~ who can give us Love ~ Peace ~ Joy etc. I have GOD in my life and my KARMA is now much CALMER ! GOD has given you a Son which is a great blessing and provide you with an infinite focus for GOOD ! Thinking of you ~ Praying for you ~ BRIAN (UK) .
May 31st, 2017 05:42
Karma
swingline said:
Poetry is emotions in motion . As long as you relate your emotions and feelings to the reader the poem is a success . While spelling (is it raped or rapped) is a good thing and prevents misunderstanding it can be overlooked and often is . Structure and rhyme shows the poet has discipline but again not necessary to moving one\'s emotion . The ultimate judge should be you . Do you like it , can you make it better , are you satisfied . Often new ways of expression in poetry does not catch on for sometime before it gains popularity .Just concentrate of putting your emotion and insight out for everyone to see . If they like it good and if they don\'t then it\'s their problem .
May 31st, 2017 03:26
swingline said:
Poetry is emotions in motion . As long as you relate your emotions and feelings to the reader the poem is a success . While spelling (is it raped or rapped) is a good thing and prevents misunderstanding it can be overlooked and often is . Structure and rhyme shows the poet has discipline but again not necessary to moving one\'s emotion . The ultimate judge should be you . Do you like it , can you make it better , are you satisfied . Often new ways of expression in poetry does not catch on for sometime before it gains popularity .Just concentrate of putting your emotion and insight out for everyone to see . If they like it good and if they don\'t then it\'s their problem .
May 31st, 2017 03:26
Karma
orchidee said:
I find most people\'s poems are \'good enough as they are\'. That\'s what you\'ve written, rhyming or not. It doesn\'t have to rhyme. We each have our own style.
May 31st, 2017 01:54
orchidee said:
I find most people\'s poems are \'good enough as they are\'. That\'s what you\'ve written, rhyming or not. It doesn\'t have to rhyme. We each have our own style.
May 31st, 2017 01:54
Karma
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m being silly - who is the Karma guy (or gal)? I don\'t know him (or her)! lol.
May 31st, 2017 01:43
orchidee said:
A fine write. I\'m being silly - who is the Karma guy (or gal)? I don\'t know him (or her)! lol.
May 31st, 2017 01:43
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