drowning in my brain
little lay lay said:

I enjoyed that your poem cuts deep in such little time and speaks volumes off of my screen to my ears. I can hear your feelings within the writing please continue writing.

June 1st, 2017 23:42

drowning in my brain
BRIAN & ANGELA said:

WELCOME FRIEND ~ Thanks for your first Poem ~ which expresses ~ very graphically ~ how a lot of us feel ~ and certainly felt when we were TEENS ~ Ready to BURST ! We are like balloons and we go into overload every day until we reach \"Bursting Point\" There is a \"cri de coeur\" in you poem ~ \"Don\'t let me BURST ~ please GOD ~ let me DEFLATE ~ AMEN\" I agree ~ when a balloon bursts ~ or a human being goes into melt down that is the end ! But a deflated BALLOON can be reinflated and be a thing of beauty again ~ we all love Balloons ! Your mention of GOD is very interesting ! On my own I would have burst years ago ~ BUT ~ I believe in GOD and in return he fills me with His Holy Spirit who controls my life and stops me from \"over-inflating and bursting\" ~ AMEN Thanks for sharing ~ Yours BRIAN (UK) Pl;ease check my Poems ~ Thanks B.

June 1st, 2017 18:34